fire within my heart

there's a fire in my heart
it burns for you from the start
tonight i have one desire
to take you away with me

it break my heart to see you cry
darling please - i dont want to say goodbye
'cause girl you know im gonna miss you
oh Lord i rememnber you

I was thinkin' about all our years together
Hope you and me last forever
our love will never die
i love you with all my life

Nothing can take you away from me
I will fight to get you free
i will die to make you free
we will live together happily

Ohh... this is a very sweet poem ^^

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darling please - i dont want to say goodbye

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hmm...i think this(...) or (,) will suit better.. :p

The rhymes are very nice...The flow was great..i dont know how to comment more... it's quite good already :) nicely done.. ^^

and love the way you start...though...you could show more about you blazing~ :p