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    fire within my heart

    there's a fire in my heart
    it burns for you from the start
    tonight i have one desire
    to take you away with me

    it break my heart to see you cry
    darling please - i dont want to say goodbye
    'cause girl you know im gonna miss you
    oh Lord i rememnber you

    I was thinkin' about all our years together
    Hope you and me last forever
    our love will never die
    i love you with all my life

    Nothing can take you away from me
    I will fight to get you free
    i will die to make you free
    we will live together happily

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    Re: fire within my heart

    Ohh... this is a very sweet poem ^^

    darling please - i dont want to say goodbye
    hmm...i think this(...) or (,) will suit better..

    The rhymes are very nice...The flow was great..i dont know how to comment more... it's quite good already nicely done.. ^^

    and love the way you start...though...you could show more about you blazing~

    Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
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