Thread: firecracker

Originally Posted by god of death

i know you all hate my spelling and grammar mistakes but its just how i write.
anyhow just look past that into the emotion that i put forth

firecracker
like a firecracker
Lighting up the skys in my heart
its been dark for so long here
im sending out a flare to be seen by all
im lighting myself like a firecracker.

soon ill explode, into a hopeless romantic guy.
im like a firecracker ready to go at anytime.
i just need to find the girl that my heart can be with
and ill shine with all my might for her
ill let go all that ive held inside for years.
ill explode with the love that i have hidden.

im a firecracker just wasting time.
hopeing that ill find someone that will give me the time.
im lost right now but im hopeing to be found.
who's the one to light the fire to make me explode

Awwww this ones really hopeful and sweet *cough* ummm... I mean manly!! and spooky .. yeah that's what I mean... yeahh ...
lol but really I like it

oh cut that nonesense! its ment to be sweet and hopeful....mostly hopeful

Again I say, make an effort towards the craft you are trying to excel in. Until then? Your poems seem so.. Dumb.

once again there is a disclaimer and i reconginze your crite and what not but i would hope that you wouldnt just refer to it as dumb

good,good,weird.......but still...good! keep it ups!

weird? how is it weird? please explain! cause i just dont understand what you mean