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    First Drop Of Blood

    Here's a poem that I wrote.It's pretty dark...maybe even darker than my others.And sorry that it's long,I just couldn't help it.A good friend inspired me 2 write this.I hope everybody like it.Please comment,thanks


    Title-First Drop Of Blood


    I cut myself everynight
    Just so I can feel better for the Night
    I need to Bleed,Since I can no longer Weep
    I wanna see Red,Before I go to bed
    I can never go to bed with out seeing Red
    I just love that sound
    The sound of the First Drop
    First Drop Of Blood!

    "Red,Red,I wanna see before bed"

    Just to feel good for a minute
    I have to Slice every second
    I need to feel Pain,To feel at Peace
    I need to feel the Blade
    Till i'm numb all of the way!

    "Blade for Pain,Pain for Peace"

    I need the Blade to Bleed
    I need to Bleed since I can no longer Weep
    I need the Blade to feel the Pain
    I need the Pain to feel at Peace,At Last
    I just want to hear that Lovely sound
    The sound of the First Drop Of Blood!

    "Blood that looks like Rain,I wanna see the Bloody Rain"

    I Cut and Slice everynight
    I've got to feel that Painful Pleasure for the Night
    This may be a Sin that you can never Forgive
    But i've got to have this
    Just one more Night
    Let me have the Selfish Pleasure
    I say that everynight,even though I never stop it!

    "I can never stop,I need it to much"

    I've tried so many times,to stop this
    But I always end up Crawling right back
    I always take the Knife back
    It's the only way,for me to be at Peace

    "It's the only way I can feel the Painful Pleasure"

    It's to Late now
    This is the finale time
    The Last Slice for the Night
    I drew my breath,and then I saw Red
    Such a pretty color,was all over the floor
    I never understood why,Till Tonight
    I droped the Knife,and began to fall
    Falling into Darkness,is where I will stay
    I lay on the Blood Red floor,Falling futher
    I look towards the Moon and am met with the Light
    I close my eyes,for the Last time
    And whisper my finale words,Which are...
    "Goodnight"...
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    Re: First Drop Of Blood

    wow.................now that one was dark....................it was really scary...........and creepy............but it was really awesome.......................#1 lyricist ever

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    Re: First Drop Of Blood

    mmmm...it was verry yummy...i lapped it up and ate it for dinner.
    I have been in a rut and my poem have been sh!t...so you have inspired me! I really like it...If you like that kind of stuff i sugest you read the book...Cut...i can't remember the auther but it is really good...and it is really short...But really...I liked the poem. You said it was for a friend rite...it makes me wonder...i have a friend like that too...
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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    Re: First Drop Of Blood

    all that wasted blood...........Gimme a straw!
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
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    Re: First Drop Of Blood

    @ Heartless_Mage-Thanks alot Bro Happy that you liked it even though it was scary lol

    @ Lost_Love-Thanks for the comment

    @ TaurusDemon23- lol Thanks for reading
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