First Drop Of Blood

Shinigami's_Angel · Aug 11, 2006, 11:39 PM

Here's a poem that I wrote.It's pretty dark...maybe even darker than my others.And sorry that it's long,I just couldn't help it.A good friend inspired me 2 write this.I hope everybody like it.Please comment,thanks

Title-First Drop Of Blood

I cut myself everynight
Just so I can feel better for the Night
I need to Bleed,Since I can no longer Weep
I wanna see Red,Before I go to bed
I can never go to bed with out seeing Red
I just love that sound
The sound of the First Drop
First Drop Of Blood!

"Red,Red,I wanna see before bed"

Just to feel good for a minute
I have to Slice every second
I need to feel Pain,To feel at Peace
I need to feel the Blade
Till i'm numb all of the way!

"Blade for Pain,Pain for Peace"

I need the Blade to Bleed
I need to Bleed since I can no longer Weep
I need the Blade to feel the Pain
I need the Pain to feel at Peace,At Last
I just want to hear that Lovely sound
The sound of the First Drop Of Blood!

"Blood that looks like Rain,I wanna see the Bloody Rain"

I Cut and Slice everynight
I've got to feel that Painful Pleasure for the Night
This may be a Sin that you can never Forgive
But i've got to have this
Just one more Night
Let me have the Selfish Pleasure
I say that everynight,even though I never stop it!

"I can never stop,I need it to much"

I've tried so many times,to stop this
But I always end up Crawling right back
I always take the Knife back
It's the only way,for me to be at Peace

"It's the only way I can feel the Painful Pleasure"

It's to Late now
This is the finale time
The Last Slice for the Night
I drew my breath,and then I saw Red
Such a pretty color,was all over the floor
I never understood why,Till Tonight
I droped the Knife,and began to fall
Falling into Darkness,is where I will stay
I lay on the Blood Red floor,Falling futher
I look towards the Moon and am met with the Light
I close my eyes,for the Last time
And whisper my finale words,Which are...
"Goodnight"...

Heartless_mage · Aug 11, 2006, 11:47 PM

wow.................now that one was dark....................it was really scary...........and creepy............but it was really awesome.......................#1 lyricist ever

Lost_Love · Aug 11, 2006, 11:56 PM

mmmm...it was verry yummy...i lapped it up and ate it for dinner.
I have been in a rut and my poem have been sh!t...so you have inspired me! I really like it...If you like that kind of stuff i sugest you read the book...Cut...i can't remember the auther but it is really good...and it is really short...But really...I liked the poem. You said it was for a friend rite...it makes me wonder...i have a friend like that too...

TaurusDemon23 · Aug 11, 2006, 11:56 PM

all that wasted blood...........Gimme a straw!

Shinigami's_Angel · Aug 12, 2006, 12:06 AM

@ Heartless_Mage-Thanks alot Bro

Happy that you liked it even though it was scary lol

@ Lost_Love-Thanks for the comment

@ TaurusDemon23- lol

Thanks for reading

Aug 11, 2006, 11:39 PM	#1 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,351	First Drop Of Blood Here's a poem that I wrote.It's pretty dark...maybe even darker than my others.And sorry that it's long,I just couldn't help it.A good friend inspired me 2 write this.I hope everybody like it.Please comment,thanks Title-First Drop Of Blood I cut myself everynight Just so I can feel better for the Night I need to Bleed,Since I can no longer Weep I wanna see Red,Before I go to bed I can never go to bed with out seeing Red I just love that sound The sound of the First Drop First Drop Of Blood! "Red,Red,I wanna see before bed" Just to feel good for a minute I have to Slice every second I need to feel Pain,To feel at Peace I need to feel the Blade Till i'm numb all of the way! "Blade for Pain,Pain for Peace" I need the Blade to Bleed I need to Bleed since I can no longer Weep I need the Blade to feel the Pain I need the Pain to feel at Peace,At Last I just want to hear that Lovely sound The sound of the First Drop Of Blood! "Blood that looks like Rain,I wanna see the Bloody Rain" I Cut and Slice everynight I've got to feel that Painful Pleasure for the Night This may be a Sin that you can never Forgive But i've got to have this Just one more Night Let me have the Selfish Pleasure I say that everynight,even though I never stop it! "I can never stop,I need it to much" I've tried so many times,to stop this But I always end up Crawling right back I always take the Knife back It's the only way,for me to be at Peace "It's the only way I can feel the Painful Pleasure" It's to Late now This is the finale time The Last Slice for the Night I drew my breath,and then I saw Red Such a pretty color,was all over the floor I never understood why,Till Tonight I droped the Knife,and began to fall Falling into Darkness,is where I will stay I lay on the Blood Red floor,Falling futher I look towards the Moon and am met with the Light I close my eyes,for the Last time And whisper my finale words,Which are... "Goodnight"... __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^ Last edited by Shinigami's_Angel; Aug 12, 2006 at 02:06 AM.
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Aug 11, 2006, 11:47 PM	#2 (permalink)
Heartless_mage Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In the bunny lords dungeon......... Posts: 450 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 865	Re: First Drop Of Blood wow.................now that one was dark....................it was really scary...........and creepy............but it was really awesome.......................#1 lyricist ever __________________ Click here to be Myspace groupies......lol (\__/) (='.'=)This is the Bunny Lord. Copy and paste bunny into your (")_(")signature to help him gain world domination
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Lost_Love Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: I don't live anywhere, the only place I can stay safe in is the head atop my shoulders Posts: 79 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: First Drop Of Blood mmmm...it was verry yummy...i lapped it up and ate it for dinner. I have been in a rut and my poem have been sh!t...so you have inspired me! I really like it...If you like that kind of stuff i sugest you read the book...Cut...i can't remember the auther but it is really good...and it is really short...But really...I liked the poem. You said it was for a friend rite...it makes me wonder...i have a friend like that too... __________________ there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...
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TaurusDemon23 SuperVillain Of AO Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In the kingdom I built over Mario's dead body...... Posts: 994 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 2,552	Re: First Drop Of Blood all that wasted blood...........Gimme a straw!
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Aug 12, 2006, 12:06 AM	#5 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,351	Re: First Drop Of Blood @ Heartless_Mage-Thanks alot Bro Happy that you liked it even though it was scary lol @ Lost_Love-Thanks for the comment @ TaurusDemon23- lol Thanks for reading __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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