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Mar 01, 2008, 12:27 PM
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 | the first poem i ever wrote Dead Heart, Lost Soul I leave this world with sadness and despair I leave it to the ones who made it so I give my bloody heart to my kin of old I give my dying soul to the ones I love most My darkened corpse I give back to mother earth My kindred spirit I give back to sister moon
__________________ I live and die by the sword Last edited by Raed; Mar 01, 2008 at 01:07 PM. |
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Mar 01, 2008, 01:06 PM
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 Credits: 21,401 | Re: the first poem i ever wrote I liked it it was pretty good but one thing you might want to do is not right it in a hard to see color so everybody can see it but good job for a first time poem kepp writing. |
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