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Reply With QuoteI liked it it was pretty good but one thing you might want to do is not right it in a hard to see color so everybody can see it but good job for a first time poem kepp writing.
Dead Heart, Lost Soul
I leave this world with sadness and despair
I leave it to the ones who made it so
I give my bloody heart to my kin of old
I give my dying soul to the ones I love most
My darkened corpse I give back to mother earth
My kindred spirit I give back to sister moon
Last edited by Raed; Mar 01, 2008 at 01:07 PM.
I live and die by the sword
I liked it it was pretty good but one thing you might want to do is not right it in a hard to see color so everybody can see it but good job for a first time poem kepp writing.
Raed (Mar 01, 2008)
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