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    First "thing" ever.

    I don't know if this nessecarily counts as a poem. Since I've never written one and don't read them often, but I figured "what the hell" and tried to come up with one. Anyways here it is -

    You are the strife
    The blood stained ripples
    In the vibrant lake
    My life/
    You are the fairy man
    Of lust
    Drying my beautiful life
    Into naught
    But air and dust/
    Polluting me
    With thoughts of greed
    You are the one
    I do not need/
    How must I quit you?
    Your addictive ecstasy of decadence
    Absent of redemption
    Death is no acception
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    Re: First "thing" ever.

    wow you are deeply in love indeed, nice poem keep it up.

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    Re: First "thing" ever.

    wow... great poem! nice choice of paradox... it brings out your true feelings... am gonna keep a lookout for more of your works... ^^

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    Re: First "thing" ever.

    Thanks for the positive feedback.
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    WOW I think that is one of the best Poems I've heard in a while

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    Re: First "thing" ever.

    wow looks like our boy here got laid with his girl. Anyway i like it. Keep it up.

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