First time

For "him". MY white rose

I cannot shake you
I cannot break you
I cannot get you off my mind

You're sweeter honey
Worth more than money
Worth ALL of my time

I risk it all for you each night
Never fearing
Never regretting
Because I know you'll be on four after nine

And once I see that signal of approval
I suddenly feel just fine

You make me laugh
You make me squeal
You make me shout at times

Some of the things you say are funny
Other's are lame but yet ever so sweet

You call me yours and baby girl
and whisper those three words that send my heart racing

I start to squeal and smile in delight
as you just laugh and smile right along

Sometimes I picture us together forever
Living together in harmony
Not caring about anything in this world
except for the fact that it's fianlly just you and me

I even have plans on giving you my all
Giving the one thing that makes me the girl who shall become woman

As the saying goes:
Like a ballon, one pop and it's gone
But you know I trust you

I give you my undying love and attention
Everything about me I never failed to mention

You know my secrets
My likes and faves
Even know what I fear and I what I did the other day

I won't hesitate any longer in saying those three sweet words to you
Justin my white rose and my love
I honestly and genuwinely can say that I do in fact LOVE you

The poem is great. The flow of it was really nice, and felt good through the whole way. I personally didn't see anything wrong with it. Nice one!

Wow.... A loooooooove poem. Very nice. And typically, I cant stand love poems. But this was good. It wasn't all corny like other poems. And its different for you to write such a romantic piece, so that made it fun to read as well. Coincidentally, I think this has been one of the bests poems Ive read of yours. (I feel like I say that every time I read a new poem of yours).