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    First time

    For "him". MY white rose

    I cannot shake you
    I cannot break you
    I cannot get you off my mind

    You're sweeter honey
    Worth more than money
    Worth ALL of my time

    I risk it all for you each night
    Never fearing
    Never regretting
    Because I know you'll be on four after nine

    And once I see that signal of approval
    I suddenly feel just fine

    You make me laugh
    You make me squeal
    You make me shout at times

    Some of the things you say are funny
    Other's are lame but yet ever so sweet

    You call me yours and baby girl
    and whisper those three words that send my heart racing

    I start to squeal and smile in delight
    as you just laugh and smile right along

    Sometimes I picture us together forever
    Living together in harmony
    Not caring about anything in this world
    except for the fact that it's fianlly just you and me

    I even have plans on giving you my all
    Giving the one thing that makes me the girl who shall become woman

    As the saying goes:
    Like a ballon, one pop and it's gone
    But you know I trust you

    I give you my undying love and attention
    Everything about me I never failed to mention

    You know my secrets
    My likes and faves
    Even know what I fear and I what I did the other day

    I won't hesitate any longer in saying those three sweet words to you
    Justin my white rose and my love
    I honestly and genuwinely can say that I do in fact LOVE you

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    Re: First time

    The poem is great. The flow of it was really nice, and felt good through the whole way. I personally didn't see anything wrong with it. Nice one!

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: First time

    Wow.... A loooooooove poem. Very nice. And typically, I cant stand love poems. But this was good. It wasn't all corny like other poems. And its different for you to write such a romantic piece, so that made it fun to read as well. Coincidentally, I think this has been one of the bests poems Ive read of yours. (I feel like I say that every time I read a new poem of yours).
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