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    first time trying haiku

    winter slowly creeps
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    of many men
    leaving the soul bare

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    Re: first time trying haiku

    umm.. well I'm not sure if that's a hiku... I did one about Fall in 8th grade and it was ... different.

    It's still good though, it's different but i like it. ^^
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    Re: first time trying haiku

    thats would be
    7
    5
    7 if i remember correctly..
    which i may not but i do know what you wrote is not in the correct sylable form
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    Re: first time trying haiku

    yeah it is
    7
    5
    7
    but still even though its not written correctly I still love it! Its a very good poem just next time if you wanna do a hiku remember that ^^



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