Thread: Flawed

I didn't like the second to last stanza (felt it was superfluous), but I loved this poem. I was reading it going, "Mmm-hmmm . . . yup . . . Oh, yes . . . Same here . . . Awwww." Well-written, mate.

I think this was one of the better poems, it shows alot of emotion and happiness, one thing everyone wants and it is wierd that no matter how wierd you are or uncool to someone else, that one special person thinks your perfect in everyway. good job Sprout keep it up.

Thanks to both of you for your comments. I'm glad you liked my work. I haven't written anything that rhymed in a while, so I figured I'd give it a shot.

your more than welcome sprout. I like giving credit where credit is due.

@.@ hey...this poems speaks of me a lot.. except that im gaining weight though.. but i am quite skinny.. still better start them workout again..sheesh...

All these flaws and yet,
I'm still loved. Ain't it great?
I'm so defective, but she
still wants me as her mate

yea.. and she kept saying that youre perfect to her.. ahh *sighs*

Nice poem... ^^ I like this one very much.. nicely done... keep it up ^^

I smoke too many cigarettes
and drink to much coffee.
I'm addicted to video games too.,
I dare you to try and stop me.

I watch cartoons everyday
and I stay up way too late.
Which makes me lazy and
that is why I procrastinate

so much like me.. maye most of us here are like that..except tenchu san... he likes studying

I am on the phone with you RIGHT now... But I thought I'd let you know, that I really love this poem. Especially cus you lecture yourself.

Originally Posted by bratling

I am on the phone with you RIGHT now... But I thought I'd let you know, that I really love this poem. Especially cus you lecture yourself.

LOL, I'm glad you like it. I kinda figured you'd get a kick out of my Sprout-bashing.

And thanks to Ray as well. It appears we have much in common. LOL.