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    Hell Enforcer George Wants Beer Champion, Monkey Cliff Diving Champion, Tilt 2 Champion hellknight may be famous one day hellknight may be famous one day hellknight's Avatar
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    flower

    a very bright rose
    petals will bloom
    bright and clear like the moon

    a beautiful flower
    will fly into the air
    all i can do is stare

    one day you will grow
    one day you will die
    but you'll reach the sky

    yellow, red, white, blue
    all very beautiful
    colors are so wonderful

    roses are red
    violets are blue
    sugar is sweat
    ...........and so are you


    i dont know what i come up with this so please comment and i did the best i could out of this lol

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    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
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    Re: flower

    Dude you did great on this one. It only needs some minor changes such as capital letters for every line you start.

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