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    Flower In The Heart

    I had a dream, in a city of darkness...
    You were all that shined.
    You told me of a flower that grows in the heart.
    Slowly I began to relize
    The world falling apart.
    Give a little strength to this new born love
    So that I may bloom the flower in my heart.
    And reach up, to the sky...
    ...So that I might be with you when I die.


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    Re: Flower In The Heart

    cool...that was great man...I really liked it...
    If they really had a desire to live, they would've been more aware of how easy it is to die.

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    Re: Flower In The Heart

    that is really impressive

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    Re: Flower In The Heart

    nice poem man, keep it up.

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    Re: Flower In The Heart

    It has a significant meaning. Keep up with the poems.
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    Re: Flower In The Heart

    that was good! a little depressing but hey i like it!
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    Re: Flower In The Heart

    I had a dream, in a city of darkness...
    You were all that shined.

    " I like this verse because its very unique u have a dream pure and inoccent in darkness and it was ur light"

    You told me of a flower that grows in the heart.
    Slowly I began to realize
    The world falling apart.

    " this part connected to the first verse THe flower representing the light or the dream is growing as the world is falling apart mentioning the darkness"

    Give a little strength to this new born love
    So that I may bloom the flower in my heart.
    And reach up, to the sky...
    ...So that I might be with you when I die.

    " A GREAT finish to the story Letyou light grow and be happy with i while you have it, because one da it will vanish into the darkness"notices the word death""

    THis is a great poem very unique and highly original GREAT JOB A+++
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    Re: Flower In The Heart

    Quote Originally Posted by jaderabbit
    I had a dream, in a city of darkness...
    You were all that shined.

    " I like this verse because its very unique u have a dream pure and inoccent in darkness and it was ur light"

    You told me of a flower that grows in the heart.
    Slowly I began to realize
    The world falling apart.

    " this part connected to the first verse THe flower representing the light or the dream is growing as the world is falling apart mentioning the darkness"

    Give a little strength to this new born love
    So that I may bloom the flower in my heart.
    And reach up, to the sky...
    ...So that I might be with you when I die.

    " A GREAT finish to the story Letyou light grow and be happy with i while you have it, because one da it will vanish into the darkness"notices the word death""

    THis is a great poem very unique and highly original GREAT JOB A+++

    I agree! This Poem is AWSOME!!! Great job keep up the good work on the poems!

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