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    Flower of My Eyes

    Just like a flower,
    Your name sound so fresh.
    Just like that flower,
    Elegant and sweet.
    How to describe you?
    It can't be done in one word.
    You are so complicated,
    Jet so simple.
    You don't do much,
    But surely show you beauty.

    How can I tell you this,
    Maybe is not real,
    Maybe I'm lying to my self.
    It may be that;
    But I really don't care.
    I will take care of this flower,
    Even though she won't answer to me.
    But I will watch her grow even more.
    This flower won't die,
    Because in my heart will live.

    You will never guess,
    What kind of flower this is;
    Is the kind that makes me smile once more,
    The kind that I'm able to love,
    And never giving up,
    But always going on.
    Her numerous petals make it easier,
    To admire her splendor,
    Many colors,
    But only one kind.
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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    Re: Flower of My Eyes

    Hey! Hey! i really like these
    Maybe is not real,
    Maybe I'm lying to my self.
    .I can apply this to myself LOL because practically I also love someone like the one that you described in your poem!
    I really love it! it is really well done!
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: Flower of My Eyes

    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    Hey! Hey! i really like these .I can apply this to myself LOL because practically I also love someone like the one that you described in your poem!
    I really love it! it is really well done!
    thanks...i wrote it for a girl that ive been in love for too long but she wont look at me in that way..jeje.. thanks for commenting...
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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    Re: Flower of My Eyes

    Yeah, I know what you meant.I also love a girl that I took notice I think when a few days ago after the start of school.LOL! coincidentally I stare at for almost 15 secs then I nod for bit then stare at her again!.Strangely I started liking her at first glance!.I wasn't close to her like you and oddly enough because I know a close friend of hers that told me that the girl I like treats me like one of her friends which i don't believe at all!.
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: Flower of My Eyes

    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    Yeah, I know what you meant.I also love a girl that I took notice I think when a few days ago after the start of school.LOL! coincidentally I stare at for almost 15 secs then I nod for bit then stare at her again!.Strangely I started liking her at first glance!.I wasn't close to her like you and oddly enough because I know a close friend of hers that told me that the girl I like treats me like one of her friends which i don't believe at all!.
    nice...i hope in the future everything goes well for you... but remember.... always appreciate what you have in front of your eyes the most..jeje
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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    Re: Flower of My Eyes

    always appreciate what you have in front of your eyes the most
    Yes, I know what you meant LOL! like I want to cry on the lap of the girl I like the most in my class when I'm down and sad.
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: Flower of My Eyes

    always appreciate what you have in front of your eyes the most
    Yes, I know what you meant LOL! like I want to cry on the lap of the girl I like the most in my class when I'm down and sad.
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: Flower of My Eyes

    i really like that it so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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