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    Flurting with Death

    Dangerous and hot,
    safe and cold,
    where two worlds meet,
    life and death,
    connecting side by side,
    take a plunge.

    Ink mixing with blood,
    slicing and cutting,
    cracking and snapping,
    as death and life,
    mingle together.

    Close to death a person can get,
    how blood can be spilt,
    and a heart can break,
    is not yet known why,
    but when two worlds connect,
    the living and the dead,
    it turns disastrous and black.

    Glass shattered,
    doors broken down,
    it takes not one but all,
    when the two worlds are connected,
    life and death, the bright and dark,
    can not be a good thing.

    I mean it when I say,
    flirting with death...
    could be fatal.

    <comments, sorry this ones no good, i just wrote it and im half asleep>

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    Re: Flurting with Death

    u wrote all that tonight??!! wow. lol, u spelled flirting right in ur poem/song, though check ur title. oh well! mainly, i like it.


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    Re: Flurting with Death

    ^^ it`s okay.... you really draw out death.. *nod nod* should check out the tittle XXD..
    but i really love the tittle.. flriting with death sounds good ^^

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    Re: Flurting with Death

    That's why the light is replaced by bright... But even though your mistake is not that much, it's not important... It's a good one, 8/10...

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    Re: Flurting with Death

    execpt for the misspelling from the title, it's alright, hun.......walking the line between life and death.........hearing ur heartbeat slow down........feeling the warm blood underneath u.....it's almost nice somehow...

    Nice one keep it up

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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