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May 02, 2006, 05:16 PM
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 Credits: 348 |  " Follow me into the Light " A tribute to the angels that help us all. Follow me into the light: Oh fair children, Wont you come with me? Wont you come to this place of happiness? I can give you all that you wish for, The price is simple, Your time, I wish to exchange your time in this world to show you, Heaven, A place that only so few get to see, Yet so many wish for, Don't become a lost and forgotten soul, Come with me to the light, Shine with this light, Show it to everyone, Don't leave anyone alone, There souls wish for happiness and love, You can give it too them, Follow me into the Light. It's not ment to be a rehash of my old Darkness poem, if it is im sry. |
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May 02, 2006, 05:18 PM
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  Nisou Tenshi  Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Right where you think I am
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Credits: 13,587 | Re: " Follow me into the Light " A tribute to the angels that help us all. This is really good. I love it!
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May 02, 2006, 05:24 PM
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Credits: 348 | Re: " Follow me into the Light " A tribute to the angels that help us all. "Poetry flows out of my soul like a river I cannot stop. All I can do is keep writing nonstop." |
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May 02, 2006, 05:29 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Destiny.. well somewhere along those lines
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Credits: 442 | Re: " Follow me into the Light " A tribute to the angels that help us all. lol, its very good, i really like your figure of speech.
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May 02, 2006, 06:40 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live in a Place where I'am Truly Happy and that would be with All My Friends
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Credits: 348 | Re: " Follow me into the Light " A tribute to the angels that help us all. That was awesome keep it up. 
__________________  I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am. A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao. http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm |
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May 02, 2006, 06:51 PM
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Credits: 348 | Re: " Follow me into the Light " A tribute to the angels that help us all. If only I could have more time to write sry guys night night. |
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May 02, 2006, 06:57 PM
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Credits: 1,028 | Re: " Follow me into the Light " A tribute to the angels that help us all. hmmmm.... tbh I didnt really understand this poem. My interpretation of it would be related 2 death... Maybe a sense of guidance through that lonely time. So Its not the best poem but I do like it.
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May 02, 2006, 10:23 PM
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 AO's Demon Slayer  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one.
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Credits: 1,315 | Re: " Follow me into the Light " A tribute to the angels that help us all. wow, wut a contrast with ur other poem. With the Angels and light, i feel lke ur building up with some climatic showdown between heaven and hell. Anyway Nice One
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May 03, 2006, 01:21 PM
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Credits: 348 | Re: " Follow me into the Light " A tribute to the angels that help us all. Dang it he read my mind! Blade X did it agian. |
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