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    Following the string

    I suddenly woke up with a string on my chest
    Saying no wonder I didn't get a good nights rest
    I knew pulling it wouldn't work so I followed it
    I kept running noticing everyone had it making me not quit
    When I got closer my heart started beating fast
    Some how I wanted this to last
    I made it to a house at eleven
    As the door opens to my love in heaven
    My eyes grew big with tears of happiness
    I ran to you knowing there would be know mess
    Even without a slight to understand
    But I still reach out for your hand
    So I now know my goal was in your heart here
    As mine as well with you to never disappear

    I hope you guys like it!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Following the string

    A brilliant poem that was better than your riddles well done keep it up

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    Thank you! I really thank you a lot Mini Dev!!!!! I do hope you get them right with the riddles! I know you can do!
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    Re: Following the string

    Hehe thanks and could you do me a favour??? Write more poems pleeeeasse i need poems badly good luck

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    Re: Following the string

    At last I got it!!! ^^ lol... I had problems with understanding what you meant with this, can you imagine!? I should get my sleep ^^

    A lovely poem, beautiful and cute, sweet, dreamy!!! Ahh... I'd wish I could find this string and just follow it, but it's a lot harder in life... sadly... oh well ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Following the string

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    At last I got it!!! ^^ lol... I had problems with understanding what you meant with this, can you imagine!? I should get my sleep ^^

    A lovely poem, beautiful and cute, sweet, dreamy!!! Ahh... I'd wish I could find this string and just follow it, but it's a lot harder in life... sadly... oh well ^^
    Thats what I said as well! To myself as well. I said why can't that really happen to me. Oh well thank you for your comment as well!
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    Re: Following the string

    Kuwirules, rules! lasura check out her other poems there so good no offence to kuwi but her other ones are the best this one was very great but i love the others sorry.

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    Re: Following the string

    Hey, great poem! Alas, Lasura is right. most likely everyone who reads this poem will wish to wake with a string on their chest.... Great writing, Keep it up!
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