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    Foolish Knight...

    I'm here, your there...
    But what am I to you..?
    I'm just a fool,
    Who falls from you...

    The rain which is endlessly falling,
    Thinks why I can't forget you..?
    Where are you sun..?
    I must see you...

    Every goodbye is full of tears,
    But the result is,
    I always come to you near...
    Why I just can't stop loving you..?

    The tears in my face that I swept...
    The feeling and my heart are dry...
    I have nothing to blow anymore,
    I don't seem to feel no more...


    I'm the foolish knight who falls from you...
    My heart aches just because of you...
    But a knight doesn't shows his feelings...
    Even though he's totally broken...
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    Re: Foolish Knight...

    Hmm it shows you're in love, I guess ^_^; Nice poem. Lovely poem I love it keep it up! ^.^

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    Re: Foolish Knight...

    Thanks, Rave... Even though I'm totally broken right now...

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    Re: Foolish Knight...

    Well whoever she is she need to read your poem bro! Even though your broken you still did an awesome job!

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    Re: Foolish Knight...

    Thanks Bluefox... I appreciate it...

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    Re: Foolish Knight...

    np bro, but the poem really lets out your emotion and that's awesome, so the way I feel is it's her loss! Keep up the good work bro! Hey mind if I add you to the buddy list?

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    Re: Foolish Knight...

    Sure, I'm glad that I met some new friends...

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    Re: Foolish Knight...

    That's what AO's here for, a place where anime lovers of all backgrounds can me and make friends! Hey I'm in the military and I don't see to many people that like anime! lol!

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