Hmm it shows you're in love, I guess ^_^; Nice poem. Lovely poem I love itkeep it up! ^.^
I'm here, your there...
But what am I to you..?
I'm just a fool,
Who falls from you...
The rain which is endlessly falling,
Thinks why I can't forget you..?
Where are you sun..?
I must see you...
Every goodbye is full of tears,
But the result is,
I always come to you near...
Why I just can't stop loving you..?
The tears in my face that I swept...
The feeling and my heart are dry...
I have nothing to blow anymore,
I don't seem to feel no more...
I'm the foolish knight who falls from you...
My heart aches just because of you...
But a knight doesn't shows his feelings...
Even though he's totally broken...
Last edited by SousukeSagara; Oct 20, 2006 at 05:19 AM.
Hmm it shows you're in love, I guess ^_^; Nice poem. Lovely poem I love itkeep it up! ^.^
Thanks, Rave... Even though I'm totally broken right now...
Well whoever she is she need to read your poem bro! Even though your broken you still did an awesome job!
Thanks Bluefox... I appreciate it...
np bro, but the poem really lets out your emotion and that's awesome, so the way I feel is it's her loss! Keep up the good work bro! Hey mind if I add you to the buddy list?
Sure, I'm glad that I met some new friends...
That's what AO's here for, a place where anime lovers of all backgrounds can me and make friends! Hey I'm in the military and I don't see to many people that like anime! lol!
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