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    Forbidden Love

    From first glance he was smitten.
    But those feelings must stay hidden.
    His love is kept forbidden.

    Against a law unwritten,
    It hurts in this world they cannot connect.
    He feels lonely as he sits to reflect.

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    Re: Forbidden Love

    Nice poem keep up the good work i posted a poem somewhere you should read it it good.

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    Re: Forbidden Love

    the poem reminds me of a old anime movie of a princsess falls in love with a villiger but her father want her to marrie a weathy prince. good job.
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    Re: Forbidden Love

    Oh, god. I know this feeling all too well. I'm actually currently experiencing this feeling.

    VERY good poem, beast. I do hope to read more from you, because you are a fantastic poet.
    I'm standing in the dark calling your name, But when you don't answer,
    I realized everyday it's the same.

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    Re: Forbidden Love

    ~Nicely Written. I Like It>.>
    xD................................................ ...

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    Re: Forbidden Love

    Very nice. I like it. Great job................................

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    Re: Forbidden Love

    T,T WWAAAA why do you do this to me >< , your poems so lovely and this is the best i really love it , a short poem but fill with a lot of lonely and love @,@ ... i love it , good work i want to see more and more from you XD ... =^_^=
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