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    Talking forbidden love pt 2

    [B]KINA IF YOU DONT HURRY UP MR.MOKO WILL FAIL US!!
    as you can see im going as fast as i can.

    NOT FAST ENOUGH GOOF!! LETS GO!!

    Kina and iya were two freshmans at tokyo juban highschool. It was the second month of school and it was hot for it to be august. Kina,a bright girl,was pette,brown eyes,raven black hair and sweet as can be. Her other friend iya on the other hand was pette also but was loud, rude, and iggnorant. She had short auburn hair and hazel nut eyes. The two been best friends since 5th grade. Had each others back for anything.

    KINA WE HAVE 5 MINUTES!!!!!!!! UGH LETS FREAKING GO!

    IM COMING!!

    Kina and iya got to class a few minutes late because well kina was always slow.

    CLASSROOM:

    miss.koto and miss yogin nice to see that you want to join us!

    SORRY MR.MOKO BUT KINA WAS LATE!!

    i resent that!!

    no worries. just take your seats and lets begin.

    The day went by very slowly. mr.moko's class was the only one the two girls enjoyed. They couldnt wait to go to the coffee shop after school. It was there regular routine. SCHOOL,COFFEESHOP,MALL,HOME,PHONE. A days work. Those were the only things the girls wanted to do.

    COFFEE SHOP:

    ahhh it feels good to be in here and spell the coffee.

    shouldnt we do our homework here to save time?

    uhhhh no. my high score in galiga is way more important.

    but mr.moko really piled it on. i think we....

    stop thinking and drink some hot coco and chill!!

    your high score missyogin is more important?

    The girls looked up and saw mr.moko standing there with a cup of coffee.

    AHHHHHHHHH!! I DIDNT MEAN THAT.

    HELLO mr.moko. we ummmm just ummmmmm....

    Ladies i dont care what you all do. just make sure it's done before class tomarrow.

    Yeah!!!!! i told kina but she said no!!

    ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    WORK WITH ME KINA!!

    Mr.moko let out a laugh and invited the girls to sit with him at his table. At his table was two other people. A tall handsome man with aqua blue hair with matching eyes and the teachers pet yuu.

    UGH!!1 IT'S KANDY AND IOWA!

    KINA AND IYA YA DITZ!

    SO WHY YA OVER HERE. TUTORING!!!!!?

    WHAT ABOUT YOU?,iya mocked,HERE FOR A PRIVATE LESSON!!

    whats that supposed to mean?

    well you are teachers pet!!! you always get mr.moko's coffee always run errands, and you always SUCK up!

    DO NOT!!!!!

    LIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    tHATS ENOUGH YOU TWO. Mr.moko calmly said while taking his seat next to the blue haird gentlemen.

    Kina couldnt help but stare at him. he was everything she imagined in a man. tall,handsome, and a plus,blue eyes!!! before she knew it she was drooloing on her self.

    Hello, you are?

    kina snaped out her transe and stared at him....

    uhhhhhh...

    Im ryion. You must be kina the young lady over there referred too.

    uhhhhhhhhhh.

    He laughed slightly. how about a hot chocolate my treat.[




    not my story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! making it clear!!/B]

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    Re: forbidden love pt 2

    Yesssss you're crystal on that......The Wierdness is every where!!!!
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    Re: forbidden love pt 2

    tarrus your crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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    Re: forbidden love pt 2

    i like it i like anything

    thnx saz

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    Re: forbidden love pt 2

    Is ok.But i get lost when they talk.Half the time can't tell who is talking.And the other half i know but don't know who that person is talking to.Can put like {kina}and the other ppl when they are talk.To help me out some please
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    Re: forbidden love pt 2

    i like it it is really starting to pick up kinda, but the color is hard for me to read

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    Re: forbidden love pt 2

    i didnt write this!!!!!! im copying on how my cousin wrote it but i can make it better.

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