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    Forbidden Treasure

    There are few things that I've treasured...

    That I've had to let go forever...

    Love misplaced, a hearts disgrace, hardest to endeavor.

    For me, its unsure what is meant.

    To feel unloved, and discontent?

    I have lost the hand to hold, and have only a fingerprint.

    The odds against me, they do stack.

    And, hands of time can't be turned back.

    Still everything another gains, reminds me of all that I lack.

    I held on tight, with strength revered.

    But still, somehow it dissapeared.

    And all at once I came to live the nightmare that I feared.

    Still feel the touch apon my skin.

    Reminds me. Like a phantom limb.

    How is it that I drowned before I had the chance to swim?

    Perhaps I'll just retrace my steps.

    In all mistakes, and all regrets.

    But, I am now. What I was then. So in myself I second guess.

    Now, on my heart is left a scuff.

    Try telling myself that times were rough.

    Was it really that I let it go, or was I never good enough?

    What I have loved, and lost... was few.

    I was never unable, just unworthy to...

    ...to have ever thought I could keep a hold of a treasure such as you.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Forbidden Treasure

    That is a sweet poem. It would be pretty good for valentine's Day. I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: Forbidden Treasure

    I love your wording. It added to the overall effect of the poem. Nice job.
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