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    forest (2)

    the sent of marygold fills the air
    I can feel her presents everywhere
    she becons me to walk by her side
    she becons me no place to hide

    she walks in the silence of the night
    barefooted woman that fill my eyes
    barefooted woman its just her disguise
    she knows who i am and theres no
    refelction in her eyes

    she leads me in the forest on the
    darkest night she dosent walk she
    just glides come to me my child she
    screams in my head but I know where
    I'm to be lead

    I walk in the forest as she drags me
    along like a dear in the headlights of a
    moving car will she lead me to where I
    am safe or will she let the car tare me
    in two

    the sent of marygold fills the air
    am i the child of the light or is this
    real if this is a dream please wake me
    up or am I an alousion of someone else

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    Re: forest

    Please do not make duplicate threads. You already posted this poem less than an hour before; if there's something you need to change, edit the original thread.

    Closing.
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    Re: forest (2)

    Grumble Grumble Grumble

    Not a duplicate poem, but a duplicate title... Editing title and re-opening...
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    Re: forest (2)

    Hmm...seems he/she changed the other poem with this title...when I closed this one, they were exactly the same post.
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    Re: forest (2)

    Quote Originally Posted by gren View Post
    Hmm...seems he/she changed the other poem with this title...when I closed this one, they were exactly the same post.
    Ahh... yes indeed... ups... that's evil zig93, you know?!

    I just felt like saying something about THIS poem and now I've helped a criminal? omg...

    Ok, now about the poem...
    I lie it really much, I just love the theme... forest... the place of my dreams, you've created a powerfull scene, I just loved it...reminded me of a Dead Can Dance song... a great work I think... but don't do criminal stuff anymore, ok?

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: forest (2)

    Thank you for helping me, but the thing was when I wrote it and just as
    i pushed the send button my fuse blew and it shut everthing down. When I came back on line I dident think that it took. I will try to be more careful next time. oh thank you for saying that my poem was good.

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    Re: forest (2)

    very nice poem, lots of mystery. you should make another poem that links to this one, u know? like an ending...is he real.... or an illusion?

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