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    Forest (Poem)

    I wrote this one yesterday. Tell me what you think.

    Forest

    Follow the path into the forest
    The one cover by trees and overgrown
    At the end you’ll find a peaceful place
    Where a gentle river flows

    I can hear the birds sing
    As I watch the sun set
    From the watery mud bank

    I’ve found someplace worth being
    In a town I thought was only hell
    Beauty is all I see
    As the light shines down from the green leaves

    I close my eyes
    And drown out everything else
    All the garbage in my head
    I refuse to listen to it anymore

    If such a spot exists
    In a world such as this
    Then maybe there’s hope for me
    Even after it all

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    Re: Forest (Poem)

    wow i'd like to go there is very cool

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    Re: Forest (Poem)

    Awesome job, keep it up!

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    Re: Forest (Poem)

    wow nice poem white mage, keep it up.

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    Re: Forest (Poem)

    Interesting, makes me think partially of my way of writting, but not quite, you can check out mine to see what I mean, Tales of Renewal. I see lots of positivity in what you wrote and hope well under way. White Mage suits you quite well
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    Re: Forest (Poem)

    Very nature like. I like. Coola. Keep up the good work.
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    Re: Forest (Poem)

    Hehe, sounds like an escape from reality poem, metaphorically speaking ^_^ I like it, nice work
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    Re: Forest (Poem)

    Wow! Simply amazed by this piece of work of yours, White Mage. Really. Seems like AO withholds a lot of amazing poets. ^_^ Feeds my pleasure, so, all is well. Anyway! Yet another poem I had collected into my memories with a great meaning. Thanks for sharing this with all of us. Hope to read more of your works.

    Quote Originally Posted by White_Mage88
    The one cover by trees and overgrown
    Sorry. I am sure it is just a typo, but I want you to note this. The word "cover" is missing the "ed." Sorry. Forgive me if I am wrong. ^_^

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