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    Forever.

    I live in darkness
    Under so much pain
    Don’t know where to go
    I feel so much shame

    My faith was lost
    My innocence gone
    I was all alone
    not full of life

    Once day i saw it
    The first rays of light
    slowly getting brighter
    They filled the night

    I was in heaven
    Laying under the sun
    Giving all of myself
    For someone i loved

    It was wonderful
    the times we shared
    the things you gave me
    Will always there

    The one i loved
    The one i miss
    started to drift
    as the darkness rolled in

    The pain that was delt
    The suffering caused
    Forever i’ll live with this
    Doesn’t matter what day

    For it was loved
    For it was cared for
    I didn’t mean for this to happen
    I didn’t mean to make you cry

    This was never my intention
    They were always good
    But somehow
    I think i’ve misunderstood


    *eyes tear up* i have to go! *leaves quickly*

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    Re: Forever.

    @.@ wow...such a poem... ~.~ nicely done...sheesh so sad.. *sighs*,... good job..

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    Re: Forever.

    Very good.But very sad.A lot of emotion was showed.Great job.

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    Re: Forever.

    Thanks you guys *sniffles* it's nice that you guys think so....

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    Re: Forever.

    oh come on Jamie dont be so hard on yourself it was a beutifull poem and I agree with everyone that even though it is sad and filled with emotions that is what makes it al the better. good job keep up the good work.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    oh come on Jamie dont be so hard on yourself it was a beutifull poem and I agree with everyone that even though it is sad and filled with emotions that is what makes it al the better. good job keep up the good work.
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