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    Forever Gone!

    How quickly the wind blows as things
    seem to fall into place , the last words
    said , the kiss before it's over always moving
    never ending.

    My words are chose slowly never leaving
    something unsaid , my thoughts are always
    coming and going never knowing rest until
    there is no more to be done .


    All things change but the way it ends
    for pain is different for each and hell
    has a depth for every heart taken, love is
    an awesome thing with a horrible price.

    Redemption gone , hope is forever lost , love is a
    monster and we are its prey so many die from a broken
    heart that only the strong will live through the night
    so i say in closing life is what you make it and love does the
    rest.

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    Re: Forever Gone!

    I couldn't agree no more on this poem though!I mean in the last line I could feel all of the pain and I do felt that way before cause its natual on humans!<Many died in broken heart(actually suicide attempts that eventually ending lives of many!)
    love is a
    monster and we are its prey so many die from a broken
    heart that only the strong will live through the night
    so i say in closing life is what you make it and love does the
    rest.
    I could understand it many suffered this....
    But anyone could survive it by forgeting it and then start a new ones...
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: Forever Gone!

    How I say this one ,the wind come in a way that the ships dislike it and the life do the same .sometime fly us high in the sky but, suddenly it backs us the earth in a way smash us ..
    Your poem just amazing and describe the sad flow that you it.
    love is a monster and we are its prey.
    the only thing that I can say to you that ,move in and keep your head high..

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Forever Gone!

    the only thing that I can say to you that ,move in and keep your head high..
    HAI! that's right xxoxx one you should do know it will be able you to move on...
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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