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Jul 29, 2006, 10:05 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient
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 Credits: 1,497 | Forever Wandering  Forever Wandering What has happened to me? It feels like I’m lost as I can be Dark memories of my long lost past Makes my eyes blinded with dust Will I be forever walking? In the endless road that I’m taking With no hope in my heart that I will find That purpose on my mind. Will there be someone? Who care to be the shining sun In the darkest nights of a being, A lost soul that is forever wandering. Will I continue living? My life seems to have no meaning It feels I’m already fading Death is now calling. Will there be another chance? To have a one last glance In the world that has offered Endless wandering that I suffered.
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Jul 29, 2006, 10:12 PM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 3,212 | Re: Forever Wandering wow raja that was awesome i felt the lost emtions from that one and my favrorite part was were you described your feeling on living the hole poem was awesome i like how you sounded desprate for help i liked this one alot |
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Jul 29, 2006, 10:15 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient
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Credits: 1,497 | Re: Forever Wandering ^^ thankies Chris for your opinion about this poem i made. ^^ This poem is somewhat part of my other self...^^
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Jul 30, 2006, 02:35 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient
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Credits: 1,497 | Re: Forever Wandering Thanks Ketaro for giving an opinion about this poam i made.^^
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