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    Forever Wandering





    Forever Wandering

    What has happened to me?
    It feels like I’m lost as I can be
    Dark memories of my long lost past
    Makes my eyes blinded with dust

    Will I be forever walking?
    In the endless road that I’m taking
    With no hope in my heart that I will find
    That purpose on my mind.

    Will there be someone?
    Who care to be the shining sun
    In the darkest nights of a being,
    A lost soul that is forever wandering.

    Will I continue living?
    My life seems to have no meaning
    It feels I’m already fading
    Death is now calling.

    Will there be another chance?
    To have a one last glance
    In the world that has offered
    Endless wandering that I suffered.


    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Forever Wandering

    wow raja that was awesome i felt
    the lost emtions from that one
    and my favrorite part was were you
    described your feeling on living the hole poem
    was awesome i like how you sounded desprate for help
    i liked this one alot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Forever Wandering

    ^^ thankies Chris for your opinion about this poem i made. ^^
    This poem is somewhat part of my other self...^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Forever Wandering

    Nice poem, you put alot of feeling in that poem of yours, keep it up.

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    Thanks Ketaro for giving an opinion about this poam i made.^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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