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    Forever it will live on...

    Forever it will live on..

    She wakes up
    In the middle of the night
    To the stench of blood
    On her hands

    Whose blood it is
    She does not know
    Yet one the floor beside her
    Is the man she loves

    Slowly She gets up
    Watching for his every move
    Only she knows on the inside
    There will be none

    She trembles in fear
    In the undying knowledge
    That there on the floor beside her
    Is her dead husband

    She screams out loud
    Calling his name
    Wondering if she’s going insane
    And hoping it’s just a dream

    She gives up and with
    Blood dripping from her cold dead hands
    She travels into the bathroom
    To see her reflection in the mirror

    She’s covered in blood
    From her head to her toes
    There are no markings
    But somehow she already knew that

    Only then
    Does she remember
    The event’s
    Of the night before

    Shaking she grabs a razor
    And holds it against her wrist
    She’s dead on the inside
    As the razor slides deep in her skin

    She slowly sinks to the floor
    Knowing she’s responsible
    On the inside
    She turns hard as stone

    Her heart doesn’t beat
    Nor does she breathe
    She’s no longer living
    But dead indeed

    They loved each other
    With everything they were
    And forever will it live on
    In the memory of their daughters
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Forever it will live on...

    wow there is a lot love in this poem
    mixed with sadness to me that makes
    for a perfect yet dark romance i love that.

    and you can really feel the lonelyness
    from the poem and the love but more
    of the lonelyness and i really love that
    about this poem.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Forever it will live on...

    Dude I agree dark chalice, this poem has a crap load of love and hurt plus a bit of lonelyess, hum, holy shnigidibug! Broken lover this by far is my favoraite poem, the flow is nice, the feelings deep, and it touches a place in the heart. GREAT JOB BROKEN! keep up the poetry.
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