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    Forever Yours

    Forever Yours

    Take my hand in yours
    as we walk down the street
    Take my love I offer you
    as we sit under the stars.

    Take my kiss I give you
    As I say I love you
    Take my heart that beats
    As its already yours

    Take my life that I would give
    To see that you live another day.
    Take this Ring I offer the woman I love
    As I am forever yours till the end of time.

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    Re: Forever Yours

    Cool poem Sini!!

    hope things go well
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    Re: Forever Yours

    I wonder if this is a little something written for a proposal by any chance?

    If so, it's simply and sweet, though to make it more romantic, you could try to make it rhyme and all, but that would demand looooooots of time to work on it so it doesn't get too cheesy. I didn't know you wrote things like that....I guess even admins write sometimes
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    Re: Forever Yours

    Beautiful poem and a very original way of writing it! If it is a proposal poem it is very well written, each line express your emotion perfectly! Outstanding job writing this one! I hope to read more of your work!

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    Re: Forever Yours

    Thanks for the comments ^_^

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