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    Forevermore

    Yay, new poem. That's why I was gone so long, I was writing this poem....while I was grounded. coughcough. Anywho, please enjoy this poem.

    Forevermore

    As darkness creeps closer in mind,
    A tragedy seeps through human kind.
    And a name rings through an open door,
    As tainted blood drops to the floor.

    Of broken bones and silent screams,
    Some tormented and disturbed things.
    But now it would seem,
    That my life is but a hollow dream.

    The creatures here are not real,
    Their faces here are ever still.
    Of memories and of dreams surreal,
    Sets upon a window ceil.

    The open window let's them in,
    The images that have been.
    And the tragedy long since then,
    Is nothing but forgotten sin.

    Of a faded memory long since past,
    And ghostly shadows that were cast.
    Of faces that never faded fast,
    And nameless fears here to last.

    As darkness creeps closer in mind,
    A tragedy seeps through human kind.
    A name rings through an open door,
    Whispered here forevermore.

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    Re: Forevermore

    Oh another POEM!!!!! Yeah! Lets see.... I like it cause iot seems like a dark mysterious poem with secrets with it as well sorry it's just me and my mind thinking that. It seems like that to me but it's cool! Hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Forevermore

    That was a good pome. I liked it a lot pm me when you make anouther one k. Thanks.

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    Re: Forevermore

    Im beside myself! I hope It doesnt seem like I'm exagerating, but thats one of my favorites EVER! I just love poems that pull you in like this. Almost like its the begining of a movie... Just great.. I love it.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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