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    Forget about me.

    Forget about me and the things I did.
    The things I said. The things I hid.

    Just let me fade away.
    I can't handle seeing another day.

    Just let me go to nothingness.
    Nothings right how'd it get like this?

    Selfish and spoiled and unworthy of love,
    Untrusting, suspicious, even of what comes from above.

    Tired, weary, and unable to think.
    My rotting heart begaining to stink.

    Hurry now. Before the smell comes,
    Let me be all undone.

    Just forget about me.
    And everything that goes with it.

    Just let me fade away.
    It hurts too much to stay.

    Just let me go to nothingness.
    My hearts already there.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Forget about me.

    Agreed with Astaroth...very good rhymed poem...

    This is something like erase too it seems... a soul/mind that gave up... @.@ sheesh..

    a nice poem..emotion flourish in here.. nicely written.. keep it up ^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Astaroth View Post
    Thanks.............it is actually a very famous artist.....her name is Nene Thomas.........I don't know if you ever heard about her, but she has so amazing paintings and this is one of them.....it is called Memory
    I have heard of her actually. This one is really pretty.
    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Agreed with Astaroth...very good rhymed poem...

    This is something like erase too it seems... a soul/mind that gave up... @.@ sheesh..

    a nice poem..emotion flourish in here.. nicely written.. keep it up ^^
    Yeah... I know. Same feeling different expression.. I've given up a long time ago but didn't hae a choice in the matter. And I made one last attempt to pull myself out of this big black tar pit.....and I failed. My soul and mind is too tired to keep trying. Glad you can see it as clearly as I wanted it to be seen.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Forget about me.

    Bratling that was well writen! it catches the readers attention till the last statement. good job and keep up the good work. I hope to see more from you. (jsut so you know I really felt that one deep) *places hand over heart to ease some pain*
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    Bratling that was well writen! it catches the readers attention till the last statement. good job and keep up the good work. I hope to see more from you. (jsut so you know I really felt that one deep) *places hand over heart to ease some pain*
    Wow. Thank you SO much for your compliments. I really appriciate all the comments I get on my poem. It's good to know that it touched some one. Sorry if it hurts. I just really wish I could get away.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Forget about me.

    Awww thats sad, but a true friend or person would never let you fade, I havent known you very long, but there will be no fading under my watch! ya hear me? LOl! Any who great job I like the words, they came at me with vigilence, and power! Keep it up! *bows* hope to see more!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Quote Originally Posted by highteckdudu View Post
    Awww thats sad, but a true friend or person would never let you fade, I havent known you very long, but there will be no fading under my watch! ya hear me? LOl! Any who great job I like the words, they came at me with vigilence, and power! Keep it up! *bows* hope to see more!
    Thank you for being such a fantastic friend despite the short time that we've known each other. He won't let me fade away either at all. Seriously. I am so honored that you were so moved by this. Thanks.
    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    your so welcome and it is alright I have felt worse pain than that trust me I feel all my friends pains.


    I agree a true friend will never let one fade and there will be none of that on my watch either! Kep up the poetry bratling.
    I'm pretty damn empathetic myself. I often feel those around me's pain as wella s my own. Which is why when I hurt, myself, it's soooo overwhelming adn I get this whole textual diahrreah and spew all over the internet about my pain.

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    well either way you get yourself out of it and I am going to help anyway I can because I hate having friends in pain
    I'm tired. I'm "trying" if you want to call it that. But it;s more like walking around in confused circles mumbling angrily at yourself for being retarded. Failing to realize how crazy your making yourself look. And stupid...among other things. The pain.... is being covered by anger. Yeah it's anger at myself for the time being but...maybe someone else will piss me off and then I'll get to be at least distracted. I'd rather be angry then hurt. I'm tired of hurting.
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    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Forget about me.

    now i think about it all poems that i see are sad ones ... i can see why highteckdudu is saying that ... but yes returning to this poem it's a great one ,the last part is the best ...
    Life and Death are always one and the same
    EVEN IF A RAINBOW IS BROKEN THERE'S STILL THE SKY

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