Thread: Forget about me.

Agreed with Astaroth...very good rhymed poem...

This is something like erase too it seems... a soul/mind that gave up... @.@ sheesh..

a nice poem..emotion flourish in here.. nicely written.. keep it up ^^

Originally Posted by Astaroth

Thanks.............it is actually a very famous artist.....her name is Nene Thomas.........I don't know if you ever heard about her, but she has so amazing paintings and this is one of them.....it is called Memory

I have heard of her actually. This one is really pretty.

Originally Posted by RayMe

Agreed with Astaroth...very good rhymed poem...

This is something like erase too it seems... a soul/mind that gave up... @.@ sheesh..

a nice poem..emotion flourish in here.. nicely written.. keep it up ^^

Yeah... I know. Same feeling different expression.. I've given up a long time ago but didn't hae a choice in the matter. And I made one last attempt to pull myself out of this big black tar pit.....and I failed. My soul and mind is too tired to keep trying. Glad you can see it as clearly as I wanted it to be seen.

Bratling that was well writen! it catches the readers attention till the last statement. good job and keep up the good work. I hope to see more from you. (jsut so you know I really felt that one deep) *places hand over heart to ease some pain*

Originally Posted by Ichigo_06

Bratling that was well writen! it catches the readers attention till the last statement. good job and keep up the good work. I hope to see more from you. (jsut so you know I really felt that one deep) *places hand over heart to ease some pain*

Wow. Thank you SO much for your compliments. I really appriciate all the comments I get on my poem. It's good to know that it touched some one. Sorry if it hurts. I just really wish I could get away.

Awww thats sad, but a true friend or person would never let you fade, I havent known you very long, but there will be no fading under my watch! ya hear me? LOl! Any who great job I like the words, they came at me with vigilence, and power! Keep it up! *bows* hope to see more!

Originally Posted by highteckdudu

Awww thats sad, but a true friend or person would never let you fade, I havent known you very long, but there will be no fading under my watch! ya hear me? LOl! Any who great job I like the words, they came at me with vigilence, and power! Keep it up! *bows* hope to see more!

Thank you for being such a fantastic friend despite the short time that we've known each other. He won't let me fade away either at all. Seriously. I am so honored that you were so moved by this. Thanks.

Originally Posted by Ichigo_06

your so welcome and it is alright I have felt worse pain than that trust me I feel all my friends pains.


I agree a true friend will never let one fade and there will be none of that on my watch either! Kep up the poetry bratling.

I'm pretty damn empathetic myself. I often feel those around me's pain as wella s my own. Which is why when I hurt, myself, it's soooo overwhelming adn I get this whole textual diahrreah and spew all over the internet about my pain.

Originally Posted by Ichigo_06

well either way you get yourself out of it and I am going to help anyway I can because I hate having friends in pain

I'm tired. I'm "trying" if you want to call it that. But it;s more like walking around in confused circles mumbling angrily at yourself for being retarded. Failing to realize how crazy your making yourself look. And stupid...among other things. The pain.... is being covered by anger. Yeah it's anger at myself for the time being but...maybe someone else will piss me off and then I'll get to be at least distracted. I'd rather be angry then hurt. I'm tired of hurting.

now i think about it all poems that i see are sad ones ... i can see why highteckdudu is saying that ... but yes returning to this poem it's a great one ,the last part is the best ...