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    Forget-me-not



    Forget-me-not

    Forget-me-not my dearest sweet:
    The sugar-coated kisses we shared,
    Makes me want to float with the clouds
    Under the spacious cerulean skies.

    Forget-me-not my dearest sweet:
    The long winter seems so short,
    As you wrapped your arms to me
    Providing the warmth I wished not to cease.

    Forget-me-not my dearest sweet:
    All the dreams that we carved on old oak tree,
    All the promises we swear to make true,
    Inspired me to keep living just for you.

    Forget-me-not my dearest sweet:
    As I say my last words to you.
    Do not cry for my loss,
    Smile 'till we see each other again.



    notes: you can post your comments and critiques on this poem, they are appreciated. ^^ well, its been a long time since I wrote a poem.
    Last edited by raja_psyche; Sep 25, 2007 at 07:38 AM. Reason: I just wanted to add a Picture that suits the poem.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Smile Re: Forget-me-not

    WOW...the poem is awesome! I love your descriptions/ and the way it is written...

    although it didn't rhyme...It still made good sense to me

    good job keep it up!

    hope to see more ^^

    -Zainab

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    Re: Forget-me-not

    Quote Originally Posted by raja_psyche View Post
    Forget-me-not

    Forget-me-not my dearest sweet:
    The sugar-coated kisses we shared,
    Makes me want to float with the clouds
    Under the spacious cerulean skies.

    Forget-me-not my dearest sweet:
    The long winter seems so short,
    As you wrapped your arms to me
    Providing the warmth I wished not to cease.

    Forget-me-not my dearest sweet:
    All the dreams that we carved on old oak tree,
    All the promises we swear to make true,
    Inspired me to keep living just for you.

    Forget-me-not my dearest sweet:
    As I say my last words to you.
    Do not cry for my loss,
    Smile 'till we see each other again.



    notes: you can post your comments and critiques on this poem, they are appreciated. ^^ well, its been a long time since I wrote a poem.
    Wow. This is phenomenal. Truly. Phenomenal. And I don't use that word lightly. Your artistry is truly phenomenal. Please write more!

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    Re: Forget-me-not

    :/ i wont forget u~ xD but im not the lover stated up there...

    ^^ long time u been away.. :/ sheesh.. did not even pm.. me T.T

    Btw... i agree with divine... phenomenal indeed... captivating... nicely done... keep up the good work ^^

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    Re: Forget-me-not

    @ Zainab: Wow, thanks for the comment. ^^ I really appreciate it. I will try to make more poems in the future. ^^ Before I wrote poems with rhyme, but now i tried something different.

    @ Divine: Wow! Thanks for your comment. I was flattered when you said that this poem is phenomenal. That inspired me to do more poems. =^_^=

    @Rayme: waheheheheh! You will not forget me? waheheheh! *peace*. Yesh, I've been away for a long time... thanks to that pile of school work... shhheeessshh. Thanks also for your comment! I will try to make more poems in the future.

    To all: *leaves cookies and tea to show gratitude*

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Forget-me-not

    By far the best one i have read in a while.It flowed very nicely threw out the poem , I seen nothing wrong when i was reading it.Great job hope to see more from you
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    Re: Forget-me-not

    @ koga23: Wow thanks for your comment, I really do appreciate it. ^^ I will try to make more poems. *gives cookies and tea to you*

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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