that was a very good poem i loved that i thought it was neat and i think that you should keep up the good work.....
I know the mind~Spaces out,
I know the rhythm~Times out,
and I know the heart~feels doubt,
but if you were patient,
My mind wouldn't have~changed,
My rhythm wouldn't have~estranged,
and My heart wouldn't have~a'flamed,
and if you were.....
Forget it,
You wouldn't Understand it,
My heart was like a box,
My key was in your~grasp,
Something you didn't even have to~ask,
and if you were............
Forget it,
You tossed it aside,trash canned it,
Why couldn't you mind a~little,
Why couldn't you beat a stupid~riddle,
Why didn't you just let me~drown,
Never had the time to be~aroun'd,
and if you were.......................
FORGET IT,
Since you always~do,
Erase my memory~too,
Take me back,~de ja vu,
No more room left in my~mind,
No more us,empty~space,
Rhythm given~back,
My hearts back on~track,
Beat's for itself,no~doubt,
My Life, what it's all~about,
Good luck with~yours,
All these scars haunt me no~more,
Fight your own battles,im done with this~war,
and if you were-
There when I called,
There when I missed that corner,
There when I hit that water,
I would still be here, and you'd never of spun out of order,
Your a selfish person, eyes full of tears,
Alone for the rest of your years,
No more Time,No more Rhythm,Broken space,
How does it~taste?
Made my decision,
Just~Like~You~
Forget~it.
F.o.r.g.e.t. Y.o.u.
10-28-10,₪ ßſ£ŊŦ₪ - Hamilton
that was a very good poem i loved that i thought it was neat and i think that you should keep up the good work.....
Last edited by sabrina18; Oct 29, 2010 at 09:01 AM.
~~~~~Party Girl~~~~~ ^_~
I like this poem. Grammatical errors aside, this was a good piece of work. I like the flow and the consistency in feeling. I really like the expression of emotion in your work. Keep it up. ^_^
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