Thread: Forgive but dont Forget

Ahh the poem means significant to me because i promise not to hurt no one and there is also a big hope into not making fell bad to that person i admire your poem, and keep it up i would recommend you to see more in the future.

Rally nice poem i like it and can relate to being treated like a dog.It is truely a glimps into the minds of thoes how abuse and are abused.I really like it.

I like this poem!!! It just feel exactly the same like you said it but it's kinda hard to believe so I hope to see more!!!

It was good. It seemed a little cliche though..and short. Making it a little bit longer would have made it alot better. All in all though it was good, I give it a 6 and half out of 10. ^-^

Ooooh thanks guys for your coomments >.<
I actually prefered to keep it short and simple
but the critique is appreciated

There is nothing wrong with short poems! You do some awsome stuff with your poems. I have wanted to do a poen like this for a while and you hit the nail on the head.

Like the poem. Very cool. Hope to see more like that one.