Forgive and forget

elie26 · May 02, 2006, 12:33 AM

Betrayed and hurt
Depressed and cursed
I ask myself
The reason to this

All I've ever wanted is to be loved
More than anything else that I've wished for on earth
A hug, a smile or a friendly gesture
Is all that is needed to make me feel warm inside

But somehow the more they try to reach out for me
The more I shun them away
I can't bear the hurt that I've felt
So I strive to keep myself all alone

Hatred rose within me
Building as time grew
I snapped and turned agaisn't them
Whoever that got too close

Despising them with everything else
Gave me a reason
A reason to dipose of my useless feelings
Of love, faith and hope

If only I can find a way out
Out from this self created maze
But whenever the light seemed so near
It ends with nothing because it always disappears
Together with that little seed of hope i carry
Deep within my shattered soul

Show me the light
Guide me through
Hand in hand
I'll pass it through

I will learn to love and hope
Pray and live that they would too
Forgive and forget
A phrase so true...

SousukeSagara · May 02, 2006, 12:37 AM

Hmmm..... Nice one..... 10.9/10...... So it wouldn't be obvious over acting.....

*Zackraa* · May 02, 2006, 12:39 AM

wow elie the emotions kind of take you on a roller coaster kind of dizzying for me ^^ I really like this one

my fav part of it made me feel great

Quote:

Show me the light
Guide me through
Hand in hand
I'll pass it through

I will learn to love and hope
Pray and live that they would too
Forgive and forget
A phrase so true..

Reese · May 02, 2006, 12:43 AM

"Forgive and forget".. I love that phrase. But I never really believed it... haha, that def doesnt make sense. But its catchy and I love the way u set it out. So 8/10. ^_^

*Rave_Grip* · May 02, 2006, 12:52 AM

1000000-10! Haha bet you SS

Anyways, I love the title, the way you presented your feelings and the way poem is full of meaning.

p.s. I hope you find your true love ^_^

cerebrum · May 02, 2006, 01:04 AM

Great job Elie. I know I'm supposed to talk bout the poem.... but I just had 2 comment on the way u colourfully seperated the paragraphs like that. Very eye catching. LOL.

I love the poem... has a good meaning 2 it. I can relate... *sigh*... true love.. when will u be mine.

dude101 · May 02, 2006, 03:16 AM

nice poem ellie... well i mean brilliant poem really... anyway this seem to be kinda familiar..

my fav part was the end

Quote:

forgive and forget; a phase so true

it just sets it off nicely..

*ketaro* · May 02, 2006, 03:22 AM

umm, that was pretty kool, hey elie26 you are improving alot man, keep it up.

*Blade X* · May 02, 2006, 08:26 AM

elie, u must have gone through this urself to have written in such a beauitful way. I luv it, i go thro this myself. Forgiving and forgetting all who hate me for who i am. Nice one again, elie.

Hold.Me.X.Thrill.Me · May 02, 2006, 12:53 PM

Brilliant! Lots of different emotions in there! I liked how you used a blue font for the first verse because it made me feel a little blue. And the end two stanzas contrast with the first so well! *claps* Well Done!!

May 02, 2006, 12:33 AM	#1 (permalink)
elie26 Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement Posts: 608 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,051	Forgive and forget Betrayed and hurt Depressed and cursed I ask myself The reason to this All I've ever wanted is to be loved More than anything else that I've wished for on earth A hug, a smile or a friendly gesture Is all that is needed to make me feel warm inside But somehow the more they try to reach out for me The more I shun them away I can't bear the hurt that I've felt So I strive to keep myself all alone Hatred rose within me Building as time grew I snapped and turned agaisn't them Whoever that got too close Despising them with everything else Gave me a reason A reason to dipose of my useless feelings Of love, faith and hope If only I can find a way out Out from this self created maze But whenever the light seemed so near It ends with nothing because it always disappears Together with that little seed of hope i carry Deep within my shattered soul Show me the light Guide me through Hand in hand I'll pass it through I will learn to love and hope Pray and live that they would too Forgive and forget A phrase so true... __________________
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SousukeSagara Mercenary Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: War zones around the globe... Posts: 528 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 901	Re: Forgive and forget Hmmm..... Nice one..... 10.9/10...... So it wouldn't be obvious over acting..... __________________ Last edited by SousukeSagara; May 02, 2006 at 12:42 AM.
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Reese Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: "Enigma" Posts: 228 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,158	Re: Forgive and forget "Forgive and forget".. I love that phrase. But I never really believed it... haha, that def doesnt make sense. But its catchy and I love the way u set it out. So 8/10. ^_^ __________________
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Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,314 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,832	Re: Forgive and forget 1000000-10! Haha bet you SS Anyways, I love the title, the way you presented your feelings and the way poem is full of meaning. p.s. I hope you find your true love ^_^ __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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cerebrum Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Some part of the universe. Posts: 295 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 877	Re: Forgive and forget Great job Elie. I know I'm supposed to talk bout the poem.... but I just had 2 comment on the way u colourfully seperated the paragraphs like that. Very eye catching. LOL. I love the poem... has a good meaning 2 it. I can relate... sigh... true love.. when will u be mine. __________________ Sig courtesy goes to : Sazuka. [Sig team]
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Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,446	Re: Forgive and forget elie, u must have gone through this urself to have written in such a beauitful way. I luv it, i go thro this myself. Forgiving and forgetting all who hate me for who i am. Nice one again, elie. __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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Hold.Me.X.Thrill.Me I have ACE nashers. Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: SunnyOl'England ;] Posts: 478 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 4,237	Re: Forgive and forget Brilliant! Lots of different emotions in there! I liked how you used a blue font for the first verse because it made me feel a little blue. And the end two stanzas contrast with the first so well! claps Well Done!! __________________ TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*
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