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    Forgive and forget

    Betrayed and hurt
    Depressed and cursed
    I ask myself
    The reason to this


    All I've ever wanted is to be loved
    More than anything else that I've wished for on earth
    A hug, a smile or a friendly gesture
    Is all that is needed to make me feel warm inside


    But somehow the more they try to reach out for me
    The more I shun them away
    I can't bear the hurt that I've felt
    So I strive to keep myself all alone


    Hatred rose within me
    Building as time grew
    I snapped and turned agaisn't them
    Whoever that got too close


    Despising them with everything else
    Gave me a reason
    A reason to dipose of my useless feelings
    Of love, faith and hope


    If only I can find a way out
    Out from this self created maze
    But whenever the light seemed so near
    It ends with nothing because it always disappears
    Together with that little seed of hope i carry
    Deep within my shattered soul


    Show me the light
    Guide me through
    Hand in hand
    I'll pass it through


    I will learn to love and hope
    Pray and live that they would too
    Forgive and forget
    A phrase so true...

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    Re: Forgive and forget

    Hmmm..... Nice one..... 10.9/10...... So it wouldn't be obvious over acting.....
    Last edited by SousukeSagara; May 02, 2006 at 12:42 AM.

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    Re: Forgive and forget

    wow elie the emotions kind of take you on a roller coaster kind of dizzying for me ^^ I really like this one

    my fav part of it made me feel great

    Show me the light
    Guide me through
    Hand in hand
    I'll pass it through

    I will learn to love and hope
    Pray and live that they would too
    Forgive and forget
    A phrase so true..


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    Re: Forgive and forget

    "Forgive and forget".. I love that phrase. But I never really believed it... haha, that def doesnt make sense. But its catchy and I love the way u set it out. So 8/10. ^_^

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    Re: Forgive and forget

    1000000-10! Haha bet you SS Anyways, I love the title, the way you presented your feelings and the way poem is full of meaning.

    p.s. I hope you find your true love ^_^

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    Re: Forgive and forget

    Great job Elie. I know I'm supposed to talk bout the poem.... but I just had 2 comment on the way u colourfully seperated the paragraphs like that. Very eye catching. LOL.

    I love the poem... has a good meaning 2 it. I can relate... *sigh*... true love.. when will u be mine.
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    Re: Forgive and forget

    nice poem ellie... well i mean brilliant poem really... anyway this seem to be kinda familiar..

    my fav part was the end
    forgive and forget; a phase so true
    it just sets it off nicely..

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    Re: Forgive and forget

    umm, that was pretty kool, hey elie26 you are improving alot man, keep it up.

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