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    forgiveness

    sometimes i ask god for forgiveness
    but none comes
    my sins are great and many
    the time i fly and the time i die
    soon i will be forgiven
    but will it be to late
    time will tell
    and the moon will shine
    upon my body god will frown
    forgiveness is not within reach
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: forgiveness

    you should never give up on God..remember god never gives up on you, not until u give up on him..god is a god forgiveness..just have hope that ur prayers will be answers ..in some way if u do keep this hope ,god will see that ur prayers are answer ...the devil is making u blind to the fact that god is there for u..but i understand why u feel this way

    great job on your poem! ^.^ ..ur words are deep and appealing to me ..
    Keep up the good work...

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    Re: forgiveness

    Quote Originally Posted by SweetCandi View Post
    you should never give up on God..remember god never gives up on you, not until u give up on him..god is a god forgiveness..just have hope that ur prayers will be answers ..in some way if u do keep this hope ,god will see that ur prayers are answer ...the devil is making u blind to the fact that god is there for u..but i understand why u feel this way

    great job on your poem! ^.^ ..ur words are deep and appealing to me ..
    Keep up the good work...
    thank you sweetcandi and i will look for god but i don't know if i will succeed in finding him seeing as how far away from hi i am
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: forgiveness

    I like that alot, and I agree, with SweetCandi, too.

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    Re: forgiveness

    I kinda agree with sweetcandi, yet you cant rely on something like that all the time, you have to find your own path, your own goal in life. Nothing is written in stone. Everything around you is paper, and you are the pencil, only you can write how your story starts, and ends.
    Great poem by the way...
    fear the reaper

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    Re: forgiveness

    I just totally agree with SweetCandi..
    you need to search and not stand still for
    what has been happend in the past...
    you need it to left it behind and try to walk on...
    but I like your poem cause i can place myself in it too..
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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