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forgotten???
I wonderif yoiu think about me the way i do you..?
After so long and so many people Have you forgot my face or my voice???
Your face is burnt into my memory and your voice is my sweet surrender....
At night I long for you to hold me tight and on those stormy nights I pray for you to confort me...I know you've forgotten All those kiss's in the rain is my face burnt into your memory or my voicein your head???
Am I forgotten or have you erased all our memory's???
What did i do to make you not to want to remember me??
You'll always be a peace of my heart thats missing and can never be replaced!
I hope yall liked it i know its short but it all good lol ^_^
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Re: forgotten???
Way 2 go Kira!!!! Your getting better and better at writting!! I just love it!!! The emotion is so great,amamzing!!! :) Can't wait 2 see your next 1. :)
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Thanks shini I do got a new one that will be put up soon ~_~
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very cool poem i loved it and short or not you get the meaning of
it and thats cool and it is tuff to go through something and wonder if they forgot about you but in the end its not who you were with its who your with thats making you feel needed now. i loved it
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AWW thanks Im glad you liked it and thanks for everything^-^
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your welcome and glad i could help cant wait to read
another
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yup yup i already have anouther up lol you slow but I love ya
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too bad ur banned and ull never read this, (maybe) but i gotta say that this reminded me of all the friends that left my school and i never kept in touch with. it makes me regret that, nice poem :2thumbs: