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    Unhappy Forgotten boy's poem

    In life pain is all he had ever gotton,
    And in death he was forgotten.

    Here is a small amount of words,
    All about a lonely boy who is long gone,
    He shall speak of the reason,
    Of why he couldn't carry on.

    As he wrote his final note,
    His eyes were red from crying,
    Because of all his failures at finding any hope,
    He then refused to continue retrying.

    He brought his life to an end because,
    On the inside he knew he was dying,
    His final mindset and been permanently engraved,
    By all of those who spent all their time lying.

    Because of those,
    He always felt out of place,
    In this world,
    But he's about to leave it without a trace.

    Because to this forgotten boy,
    Life was more painful then hells eternal fire,
    So here are his final notes,
    Which he wrote just as he was about to expire.

    "Dear world,
    My message is crystal clear,
    I can no longer live with this pain,
    I can no longer live with this fear.

    The only thing that is certain,
    Is that I shall no longer have to suffer here,
    And never again will I,
    Have to shed another tear.

    Everyone of you stood in my way,
    I am certain none of you shall mourn,
    I shall simply be forgotten,
    Because your all the reason my soul is torn,

    I have encountered lies and betrayal,
    Nothing else, nothing more,
    And I cant find a single thing,
    That I have left to live for."

    With just one squeeze,
    His pain was ended with ease...


    ( this poem is for my best freind that just passed away today...
    and the note I quoted is the real note he have left behind...
    he will be dearly missed... )
    Last edited by flaminghate; May 22, 2007 at 05:42 AM.

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    Re: Forgotten boy's poem

    I know how you feel when your dearest friend will go away in earth and leave you. I also felt that way when I have a childhood friend. But I know your friend is there up in the sky with God. And will watch you in earth and to keep you safe as well.

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    Re: Forgotten boy's poem

    very hurtful poem and sad as well life makes so many uncertain turns
    its amazing that other haven't took this path your friend took but my
    sympathy and condolences this poem is very well did and it get you
    thinking on how life can take things from you that you think will
    be there for you forever.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Forgotten boy's poem

    This is an extreme sad poem. It seems so hurtful. But thats the reason I like it. I hope to see more in the future!
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    Re: Forgotten boy's poem

    Quote Originally Posted by flaminghate View Post
    In life pain is all he had ever gotton,
    And in death he was forgotten,

    Here is a small amount of words,
    All about a lonely boy who is long gone,
    He shall speak of the reason,
    Of why he couldnt carry on,

    As he wrote his final note,
    His eyes were red from crying,
    Because of all his failures at finding any hope,
    He then refused to continue retrying,

    He brought his life to an end because,
    On the inside he knew he was dying,
    His final mindset and been permanently engraved,
    By all of those who spent all their time lying,

    Because of those,
    He always felt out of place,
    In this world,
    But hes about to leave it without a trace,

    Because to this forgotten boy,
    Life was more painful the hells eternal fire,
    So here are his final notes,
    Which he wrote just as he was about to expire,

    "Dear world,
    My message is crystal clear,
    I can no longer live with this pain,
    I can no longer live with this fear.

    The only thing that is certain,
    Is that I shall no longer have to suffer here,
    And never again will I,
    Have to shed another tear.

    Everyone of you stood in my way,
    I am certain none of you shall mourn,
    I shall simply be forgotten,
    Because your all the reason my soul is torn,

    I have encountered lies and betrayal,
    Nothing else, nothing more,
    And I cant find a single thing,
    That I have left to live for."

    With just one squeeze,
    His pain was ended with ease...


    ( this poem is for my best freind that just passed away today...
    and the note I quoted is the real note he have left behind...
    he will be dearly missed... )
    I can't imagine how you feel having lost your friend this way, especially if he blamed "all of you" in his last note. Because as friends (in my world anyways) want the very best for everyone and hope that we make things better for the people that we love and that we care for.

    This was a beautiful poem at any rate. I felt the sadness entierly. I'm sory for your loss and for his pain.

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