@.@ wow...nice way with words.... the description is cool~!i love this... nice...
but the title dont really go...it made the darkness of the poem fade a bit...
but it's still a very good work.. @.@ very nice... i like it...
There it is. The fork in the road.
I have my path and you have yours.
But I'm SO terrified, to walk alone.
He's standing down my path,
Hand out and beconing.
But it's rocky, dark, and scary.
Your path is lined by rich green pastures,
The sun shines on it's smoothly paved surface.
And your hand is held out for me,
To follow you, the question is,
Will he not follow me too?
Drawn to the darkness inside me,
Like a moth to candles flame.
Calling to her, pulling and tempting,
And making me drift down that,
Scary dark and foggy path.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
@.@ wow...nice way with words.... the description is cool~!i love this... nice...
but the title dont really go...it made the darkness of the poem fade a bit...
but it's still a very good work.. @.@ very nice... i like it...
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Well, it doesn't have to go with the message of the poem. In my opinion. THe point wasn't the darkness at all. The point was the contrast between the two and the decision between the hands to take.![]()
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
Very well written, Chan. Such a complex concept--the whole fork in the road thing--yet, I know what it's like to be split in two different directions. Because I'm in the same boat as you. I hope that everything will work out fine and good job on the poem!
Thanks. I already have another working in my mind. I'm going to have to take my notebook out at work or something i think. But I have another one. Just for you.I'm glad you like this one so much.
lookit all my credits!? I'm gettin' up there.![]()
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
I don't know if it will get posted. It may not even get written. Cus it's harder for me to keep up with my mind, with a pencil. Which is why i tend to do a lot of my writing right here, in the quick reply box of whatever thread I'm reading when I get inspired. But the idea is still floating inmy mind. So maybe it will stick around long enough for paper.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
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