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    Forking Spoons!

    Imagine this...
    You're driving down the street,
    until you hit a fork in the road
    on the way to go get spoons.


    Now ain't that a b****?!
    Not only do you not know where
    you're headed, but you have
    to make a choice that can very
    well change the outcome of your journey.


    What to do, what to do?


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    Re: Forking Spoons!

    Interesting poem. I didn't really get it but I got the general idea. Good job. Keep it up.

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    Re: Forking Spoons!

    rele liked the title and the play on words. this is a style classic to poets everywhere, the age old question of where am i going, and am i doing what i want. i would have liked it to be longer, but that is only because the poem is very good. the rhyming sceme is nice and probably the best choice for this kind of poem, and the ideas convered here would be nice. i would suggest to extend the poem, but using more plays on words. nice poem overal and very enjoyable (found myself reading it multiple times and laffing )


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    Re: Forking Spoons!

    @.@ hmm..to find the spoon but hit the fork instead.... sheesh....deep? i dont get it too...

    but it is a nice style... a good poem there.. ^^

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    Re: Forking Spoons!

    hahah that is such a cool poem. ahhhh the good old folk and spoon in the road!! great dilemma there to think about!

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    Re: Forking Spoons!

    lol its very funny, i like it. your silly. Forks..... spoons

    lol

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    Re: Forking Spoons!

    Hey! Thanks to everyone who has commented thus far! ^_^

    I'm glad you all liked my extremely short poem. For those of you who don't understand this one, I'll try to explain.

    When you're trying to make a decision that pulls you both ways, it's like driving until you hit a fork in the road. The "spoon" is kinda like my happiness, or my well-being rather. So, this poem is pretty much about the choice in life I have to make that can very well change my life and the others around me. So, it's like hitting a fork in the road while driving to get spoons. Which way will one take to obtain said spoon?

    Anywho, thanks again! I appreciate your comments and support! ^_^


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    Re: Forking Spoons!

    dont fallow the paths make a new one and create a trail! I'm oppositional! So I usually wont fallow others! I make my own choices, (some times) Well that is just what i would do. i thought that was funny! Keep it up yo!
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