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    Four Faces

    Four Faces

    A pretty image for all to behold
    This art of deceit embodied in your soul
    Innocence, jovial or even depressed
    Every mask u wear, I know you less

    Everyone was convinced, so was I
    Cause I actually thought I saw you in my eyes
    That smile you flashed for all to see
    Again fooled all, including me

    No on knows the actual truth
    That you secretly smile to yourself on the roof
    What’s your motive, why is it that you do?
    Perhaps to attract the attention of a couple or two

    The path of deception hasn’t done you well
    You’ve unknowingly created yourself a shell
    No longer able to be the person you truly are
    And you realized it all after going so far

    Left alone in the dark corner, you hide
    Knowing this time nobody will be on your side
    So now I’m asking to remove your mask
    As it’ll be the last favor I’ll ever ask

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    Re: Four Faces

    Hmmm... A very good poem... It's perfect, has so much emotions in it... so much pitty and anger... This would make anyone feel bad about wearing a mask.

    I really enjoyed reading this poem and I'll be witing forward for the next one...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Four Faces

    I love it so many people like this now a days sadly we meet a lot of these kinds lately, no one really willing to be themselves and burying themselves in it


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    Re: Four Faces

    Yes, thank you. I just felt a need to write this, after getting something like that from a close friend. I just hope we can patch things up again.

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    Re: Four Faces

    I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Some how this poem feels like a summary of me in a way but it isn't but I still love it!!!! The emotions in this poem is like wow!!! I hope to see more!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Four Faces

    lol i liked it its good, like someone sad it has lots of emotion, but then again i mask is a metaphor about people who cant except wat they see with there own 2 eyes, its their world and everything shud be perfect. but love to hear more so keep on posting new peoms

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    Re: Four Faces

    Amazing!
    its so true, I've seen many people with masks so visible
    its a phenomenon to find someone who really is himself/herself, though I think I have

    again, incredible one, cheers

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