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    Frantic Orchid

    Blank thoughts ripple in my mind,
    nothing can be heard in the folds of my rhymes.

    Sometimes I feel time may be slipping
    its way through my fingers like sand.

    I fear the moments that
    have blossomed in the past,
    will be the only moments I have in the future.

    The world is crumbling,
    but am I the only one thats sees.

    The flowers will have no scent,
    the clouds will not shift, and water will not run.

    Can blood remain red?
    Will his voice always be?
    Could I ever be someone else?
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Frantic Orchid

    i feel diffrent feeling when i read it ...i like the way you writed your poem ...
    i do not know but something like mabye magic ....
    but i love it ...nice to read it ...hope to see more...

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Frantic Orchid

    Thankies ^-^ I really appreciate the compliment. I'll be sure to post some more soon
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Frantic Orchid

    Your a god!!!!! From heaven who has a gift of poems!!!!! I love reading your poems!!! Their just so special to read!!! I love how you wrote this it some how makes me think happy in a special way! I hope to see more!!!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Frantic Orchid

    Wow really? Thats kinda awesome. Thankies much ^-^ I try really hard to give my poems that feel ya know?
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Frantic Orchid

    this poem is very mysterious.nice and interesting.almost like a glimpse into the future.like...forshadowing! great job and keep it up!
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    Re: Frantic Orchid

    Thank you! I shall keep my writing up regularly as best as I can ^-^
    Dear Dinah...

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