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Reply With Quotei feel diffrent feeling when i read it ...i like the way you writed your poem ...
i do not know but something like mabye magic ....
but i love it ...nice to read it ...hope to see more...
Blank thoughts ripple in my mind,
nothing can be heard in the folds of my rhymes.
Sometimes I feel time may be slipping
its way through my fingers like sand.
I fear the moments that
have blossomed in the past,
will be the only moments I have in the future.
The world is crumbling,
but am I the only one thats sees.
The flowers will have no scent,
the clouds will not shift, and water will not run.
Can blood remain red?
Will his voice always be?
Could I ever be someone else?
Dear Dinah...
i feel diffrent feeling when i read it ...i like the way you writed your poem ...
i do not know but something like mabye magic ....
but i love it ...nice to read it ...hope to see more...
Foolish beating
Thankies ^-^ I really appreciate the compliment. I'll be sure to post some more soon
Dear Dinah...
Your a god!!!!! From heaven who has a gift of poems!!!!! I love reading your poems!!! Their just so special to read!!! I love how you wrote this it some how makes me think happy in a special way! I hope to see more!!!!!!!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Wow really? Thats kinda awesome. Thankies much ^-^ I try really hard to give my poems that feel ya know?
Dear Dinah...
this poem is very mysterious.nice and interesting.almost like a glimpse into the future.like...forshadowing! great job and keep it up!
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Thank you! I shall keep my writing up regularly as best as I can ^-^
Dear Dinah...
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