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    Freedom does anyone know
    the real meaning of it? , the wind
    hitting your face , no problem can
    stop you from going forward , you
    just fly away.

    Things just seem so confining
    and restrictive as you go through
    life never able to make your own
    choices on how things should go.

    To embrace freedom is to enjoy
    what life has given you but no one
    See's this not even me , there is so much
    hate , mistrust and anger , spread your wings
    and be free or do you know how?

    Things just seem so much easier when
    you have no cares or anyone to love so why
    do we always strive to be with the one we
    love so the heart can die in its cage of regret
    for letting the freedom go?

    Freedom its the wind in your face ,
    the feeling of letting go and just falling
    forever not ever knowing hwere you will go
    does anyone really remember or know
    what thats like?
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    this poem is about letting go of things no matter
    how dear or important and looking out for #1 if thats
    how some are , becuase there is just so much stress
    some forget what it is to be free of burdens or troubles
    that were brung to them by ignorant people or just somone
    not letting the freedom remain while having the person
    there at the same time , so i ask does anyone remember
    what freedom is? or does freedom and love not belong together?
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: free

    Wow, so many awesome thoughts about freedom.


    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post

    Things just seem so much easier when
    you have no cares or anyone to love so why
    do we always strive to be with the one we
    love so the heart can die in its cage of regret
    for letting the freedom go?
    That part is esspecially true. And there is no definative answer. Why do we crave companionship, when it seems to burden most with obligation?
    I think its because no man is an island. Most people feel it is worth the obligation to another, as long as you have someone in your corner.

    Yes you're free when you're alone. But facing lifes troubles seem harder when you have no one.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: free

    you have a point there and your right about
    things being easier when you have someone
    but i guess its the person not the life style that
    makes or breaks the freedom you want
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: free

    Hmm...freedom and love....some ppl say love and freedom are the same thing
    som say if u have love u have freedom as well...and some also say if u have love u are not free...

    but i agree with what peachy said...and i also think it depends on the person itself...

    Other than that...another good poem ^^ love the message inside...

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    Re: free

    WoW!!! *gasps* this is just wonderful, made me smile and feel like flying at the start and then made me cry somewhere in the middle... I think here:
    "Things just seem so much easier when
    you have no cares or anyone to love so why
    do we always strive to be with the one we"

    A great, great poem...

    And indeed, I know not how it is to really be free, though I kind of feel like that for some time after I've broken up with someone... there is a moment when you think: "I am free." and it's all you grab hold of at that moment... But otherways... this world is just full of worries... Still do I love it less because of that? No

    A really great work... Hope to see more ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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