Free at last

Some times we wonder what it is like to be free,
without any fears of losing one self.
To be without bars or cages.
To be completely open for every one to see.
To be free with out being stopped by mistakes.
Mistake are made every day and lessons are learned.
But we still wonder what if we can be free of all mistakes and
the pains they causes.
That would be a dream to live to be free without fear or regret.
Just to be able to let go of all pain.
Just to be the real you ,
the one you hid deep within you.
For life is to be free.
To dream without fear.
To live ones own life without fear,
of wondering what people think of you.
Just be the real you and no can hate for that.
Be free to live your own life ,
be free to dream without fear,
and without losing one self as a person.
Just be who you are without fear of what people think of you...

amazing!! i love it soo much. true i wish to be free!! i think many people can relate to this awesome poem:D:. very good job!! i want to see more from you!!:D::D::angel:

that is a great poem. i love it and i actually wish i could express my real self without anyone judging or finding a mistake. good job and keep it up!

WOW!!! I find this really good Crystalann!!!!
It's so... it made me thing a lot, about how you should be, about what I want this life to be....
And it made me sad, sad because freedom like this is so hard to gain- you must be a really strong person to be able to...

Nice work- wonderful work!!!! I'll be waiting forward for more!!!

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Originally Posted by BAUTIFULSOUL

that is a great poem. i love it and i actually wish i could express my real self without anyone judging or finding a mistake. good job and keep it up!

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you can just trust in yourself and you will fine.
i glad you enjoy it thank commenting :smile:

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Originally Posted by Lasura

WOW!!! I find this really good Crystalann!!!!
It's so... it made me thing a lot, about how you should be, about what I want this life to be....
And it made me sad, sad because freedom like this is so hard to gain- you must be a really strong person to be able to...

Nice work- wonderful work!!!! I'll be waiting forward for more!!!

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thank you and i glad you enjoyed it
if you work at just about any thing can be gain it just
time to reach your goals:smile:

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Originally Posted by ryomakurosaki

amazing!! i love it soo much. true i wish to be free!! i think many people can relate to this awesome poem:D:. very good job!! i want to see more from you!!:D::D::angel:

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thanks i am glad you like it
u can just be how you are
thing will turn out all rite:smile:

again another poem thats absolutely awesome:D! keep up the good work^^

thank you i glad
you like it
and thanks for the comment

This poem is really good Crystalann I like it. It shows that you do not care what others think of you as long as you are enjoying yourself. Very good outlook on life. (just so you know that is how I am all the time.) I will act however I want and if people dont like me because I dont act "normal" then so be it they dont really deserve to be around me. may sound harsh but hey that is life. anyways good poem I am looking to see more from you. Keep it up.