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    To be free (truly free)

    Wise old man that sits in a tree,
    He told me that I’d be free.

    As I wondered on and paid no mind,
    I lived this life dieing a little inside.

    I never knew the Lord or read his book,
    I just hung on to the Devils hook.

    Not knowing my life was a dead end,
    Even though I had a money and a fabulous man.

    Money cant buy happiness, or save my soul,
    No way into heaven, no way, no goals.

    The pain in this human heart builds up so high,
    I begin to wonder, ‘Will I die?’

    I pray to the Lord for what I have done,
    I pray to the Holy Father and His Son.

    Save me and this human infested soul,
    So I wont be able to sell the devil this soul.

    I see the light and feel alright,
    I feel so good I begin to cry.

    My soul is his to keep and save,
    For it was he that my road he paved.

    I thank the Lord, I thank he,
    For he let me know what its like to be free.
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    Re: To be free (truly free)

    wow... a very good poem.. classic style i like it.. and the poem speaks of the truth too.. ^^ nicely done... keep it up

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