Thread: "Freeze"

Warm, warm heart,
beat no more.
Cool so much,
freeze ones core.
Stop the ace,
the pain inside.
Make me numb,
for my soul has died.
Warm, warm heart,
freeze as stone.
Make me harsh
to be alone.
Stop the hurt,
the screaming with in.
Send me to hell
for all my sin.
just stop the warmth
and beat no more.
Cool so much,
freeze ones core.

I wrote this back in November, just so you know. I'm thinking about entering it into a contest somewhere. What do you think of it honestly? BTW... most of my poems are on my poetry sites too. ^_^ Some maybe even in books.