WOW, I really love this poem as it reminds me of one my old freinds and the way you set it out is very good as well.
I'd love to hear another poem from you so keep up the good work.
Why do I try
Why do I bother
Everytime I hear you cry out
I still reach out my hand to help
Knowing full well that you will smack it away
I want to help
I want to be there for you
I want to protect you and lift you up
So you can fly like I know you can
I guess I can only stand back and watch
I guess I can only hope that you do fine on your own
Someday I'm sure you'll fly
I'm just sorry that I won't be there to see it
Some friend I turned out to be
I'm sorry I failed you
WOW, I really love this poem as it reminds me of one my old freinds and the way you set it out is very good as well.
I'd love to hear another poem from you so keep up the good work.
aww... :/ this is nicely done... ^^ i liked it..
Hmm..don't worry..u did fine ^^ u tried right?
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Good job on the poem ^^ keep up the good work...![]()
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Thanks aeonking I just need to let some of what I was feeling out. Thanks RayMe and yes I did try but in the end I still failed. But thank you both for the kind words.
wow nicly done Fireandice. and you are a great friend. dont jugde yourself by one faulty mistake. keep up the writing though it is great.
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wow!!!!!!!!!! nice poem!!!!!!!love it!!!!!!!keep it up!!!
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Wow thanks everyone I didn't think that it would be this well recived. Thank you.
You are a Good friend and in this time no one like what you writ there ..
so ..keep it up..Nice work ..^^
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