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    Someone who always listened to my sadness and happiness
    Someone who cares about me
    Someone who could make me happy
    Someone who always accompanied me
    Someone who could entertain me
    Someone who wanted to be asked to have
    difficulty
    Someone who wanted to help me
    Someone who was significant for me

    All that was the meaning of the friend for me

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    Re: Friends

    again, repetative. it makes me classify this almost not as a poem in my mind. ideas are great, but the format needs to be worked on. its gotta be like a beat. cha-cha-cha-da--la-la-la-lada-
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    i'm sorry about repetative. thanks for your critic..

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