again, repetative. it makes me classify this almost not as a poem in my mind. ideas are great, but the format needs to be worked on. its gotta be like a beat. cha-cha-cha-da--la-la-la-lada-
Someone who always listened to my sadness and happiness
Someone who cares about me
Someone who could make me happy
Someone who always accompanied me
Someone who could entertain me
Someone who wanted to be asked to have
difficulty
Someone who wanted to help me
Someone who was significant for me
All that was the meaning of the friend for me
again, repetative. it makes me classify this almost not as a poem in my mind. ideas are great, but the format needs to be worked on. its gotta be like a beat. cha-cha-cha-da--la-la-la-lada-
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i'm sorry about repetative. thanks for your critic..
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