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    Friends here.

    Your friend fades you feel it,
    You think What can I do?
    You here Just talk and convince me!

    You do your best to help,
    But you can't help feeling a loss.
    All you can do is hope for the best.

    You wonder If I were there would it be easier?
    Or, What if I somehow said something?
    You tell yourself to calm down,

    You feel your friends anger, hate and loss,
    However your helpless to make them see,
    All you know is they would do the same for you!

    You cant help again to wonder What else can I do?
    You fell worthless and want to quit with them,
    However YOUR friends wont let you.

    However you look at it,
    However you hard you try,
    somethings in life cant be changed.

    You pray for help yet none comes to your aid,
    You ask for strength yet your week,
    You want to fade but friends keep you back.

    Either way you look at it your stuck wishing,
    Hopeing that you might one day go back and,
    Keep yourself lonely so that you can fade without notice.
    Sorry guys for the randomnisisty of this one I just had an urge to write again.
    ナサン フォオツド
    Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
    Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173

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    Re: Friends here.

    Not a bad poem. It was enjoyable to read. Mm...one thing, try to make your poem flow. Perhaps you can change some of your wording. Overall, you did a great job. ^^

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    Re: Friends here.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tifa Lockhart View Post
    Not a bad poem. It was enjoyable to read. Mm...one thing, try to make your poem flow. Perhaps you can change some of your wording. Overall, you did a great job. ^^
    why thank you Tifa I will look into it and see what I can do. hum it was actually random.
    ナサン フォオツド
    Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
    Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173

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