Friends Never Come!

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 05, 2006, 11:03 PM

The need for someone to
listen to me ,is just a dream
no one will ever hear my voice
i talk to everyone and they smile at me.

They say the empty can rattles the most
you must enjoy the sound of my empty
heart needing to let go of all this pain,
why must i suffer what did i do?

Freinds what are they for?,i have
so many yet i have none yes my
confusion it total now ,and i cant
help but think that life is over for me.

There is a time when i need a shoulder
but when i turn to you there is nobody there,
where is the smile?,and the promice you made to
me,i feel the world crashing and i can not stop it.

I wish i could feel better about being here but
with how you have been treating me i see freind's
as curse, yes people you can not trust, it hurts me
everytime i see this way you dump on me how empty it is.

If only friends were true to me there are the rare time's
when i see someone smile but then i see they have a friend
that makes them see the blue sky's,why must i go through life
knowing only pain and lonelyness?, it's not fair that i live this way.

As i sit here in my room in an empty house i wish there could be
laughter again but not from but from a freind but thats asking to much
from someone like you,i didnt mean to waist your time with my sorry complaints
i was only wanting to share my day with you my freind?

I will go now and let you live your happy life....because i dont
need friends to end mine .

TaurusDemon23 · Sep 06, 2006, 12:22 AM

You pussy!! Quit thinkin suicidal! Who's gonna drive your 500k car then, huh?
And you have at least one friend. Me. And I listen as well!

Good vent poem though..........some punctuation and spelling probs.....but they are excusable, considering your emotional state.....

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 06, 2006, 12:24 AM

lol it was just a poem the thought never enterd my mind sure the poem it self was pretty much to the point but i added the last part for dramtic reason's
didnt mean to rub you te wrong way. maybe i should have staed that after i was done writing it. but im glad you liekd it though

TaurusDemon23 · Sep 06, 2006, 12:28 AM

Ah well......Just motivationals.............If only I could motivate..Wait, I do.........Man.........I just need......to......get.......LAID!!*ahem* Random thoughts, sorry. Back on topic...........Who else is gonna post.......bet there are gonna be some females here to console you............perhaps not.....ah well..........

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 06, 2006, 09:49 AM

anyway you look at it its still a poem about somone who thinks friends should be there when there not. i just hope someone take it better than you did though you concern is apreciated.

*princesslady* · Sep 06, 2006, 09:58 AM

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Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23

You pussy!! Quit thinkin suicidal! Who's gonna drive your 500k car then, huh?
And you have at least one friend. Me. And I listen as well!

Good vent poem though..........some punctuation and spelling probs.....but they are excusable, considering your emotional state.....

TAURUS YOU ARE SO ARROGANT AND RUDE. AND THAT DEMEANING WORD IS A OBJECTION TO WOMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU ARE....UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

great poem chris. my friends ross writes this kind of stuf kinda creeps me out but it's hot. nice. go to borders and recite it. poetry contest every saturday!!

TAURUS..............UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

*hellknight* · Sep 06, 2006, 10:45 AM

its very good and all not bad for a poem artist keep up the good work

powerxxx · Sep 06, 2006, 11:47 AM

that was a very nice poem , i can relate to that ,
anyways man that was an awesome poem ,
keep up the good work

BlueFox1 · Sep 07, 2006, 01:43 AM

Man this is deep! The title caught me and the poem just drugged me in! Keep up the good work!

BlueFox1

Shinigami's_Angel · Sep 07, 2006, 01:46 AM

Wow.That was really sad big bro *crys*.Well you still got me,right lol

Anyway,awesome poem as always

*Rave_Grip* · Sep 07, 2006, 04:48 AM

Nice poem, and your friends are always here ^^

Sep 05, 2006, 11:03 PM	#1 (permalink)
HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,797 Thanks: 21 Thanked 21 Times in 20 Posts Credits: 3,320	Friends Never Come! The need for someone to listen to me ,is just a dream no one will ever hear my voice i talk to everyone and they smile at me. They say the empty can rattles the most you must enjoy the sound of my empty heart needing to let go of all this pain, why must i suffer what did i do? Freinds what are they for?,i have so many yet i have none yes my confusion it total now ,and i cant help but think that life is over for me. There is a time when i need a shoulder but when i turn to you there is nobody there, where is the smile?,and the promice you made to me,i feel the world crashing and i can not stop it. I wish i could feel better about being here but with how you have been treating me i see freind's as curse, yes people you can not trust, it hurts me everytime i see this way you dump on me how empty it is. If only friends were true to me there are the rare time's when i see someone smile but then i see they have a friend that makes them see the blue sky's,why must i go through life knowing only pain and lonelyness?, it's not fair that i live this way. As i sit here in my room in an empty house i wish there could be laughter again but not from but from a freind but thats asking to much from someone like you,i didnt mean to waist your time with my sorry complaints i was only wanting to share my day with you my freind? I will go now and let you live your happy life....because i dont need friends to end mine . __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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TaurusDemon23 SuperVillain Of AO Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In the kingdom I built over Mario's dead body...... Posts: 994 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 2,585	Re: Freinds Never Come! You pussy!! Quit thinkin suicidal! Who's gonna drive your 500k car then, huh? And you have at least one friend. Me. And I listen as well! Good vent poem though..........some punctuation and spelling probs.....but they are excusable, considering your emotional state.....
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,797 Thanks: 21 Thanked 21 Times in 20 Posts Credits: 3,320	Re: Freinds Never Come! lol it was just a poem the thought never enterd my mind sure the poem it self was pretty much to the point but i added the last part for dramtic reason's didnt mean to rub you te wrong way. maybe i should have staed that after i was done writing it. but im glad you liekd it though __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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TaurusDemon23 SuperVillain Of AO Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In the kingdom I built over Mario's dead body...... Posts: 994 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 2,585	Re: Freinds Never Come! Ah well......Just motivationals.............If only I could motivate..Wait, I do.........Man.........I just need......to......get.......LAID!!ahem Random thoughts, sorry. Back on topic...........Who else is gonna post.......bet there are gonna be some females here to console you............perhaps not.....ah well..........
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,797 Thanks: 21 Thanked 21 Times in 20 Posts Credits: 3,320	Re: Freinds Never Come! anyway you look at it its still a poem about somone who thinks friends should be there when there not. i just hope someone take it better than you did though you concern is apreciated. __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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hellknight Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: South dakota, Native American Posts: 1,448 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 15,699	Re: Freinds Never Come! its very good and all not bad for a poem artist keep up the good work
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powerxxx Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere on this planet Posts: 131 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 310	Re: Freinds Never Come! that was a very nice poem , i can relate to that , anyways man that was an awesome poem , keep up the good work __________________ Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali I Fly Swiftly through the air I Spread My Wings Without A trace
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BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,176	Re: Friends Never Come! Man this is deep! The title caught me and the poem just drugged me in! Keep up the good work! BlueFox1
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Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,363	Re: Friends Never Come! Wow.That was really sad big bro crys.Well you still got me,right lol Anyway,awesome poem as always __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,314 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,887	Re: Friends Never Come! Nice poem, and your friends are always here ^^ __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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