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    Friends Never Come!

    The need for someone to
    listen to me ,is just a dream
    no one will ever hear my voice
    i talk to everyone and they smile at me.

    They say the empty can rattles the most
    you must enjoy the sound of my empty
    heart needing to let go of all this pain,
    why must i suffer what did i do?

    Freinds what are they for?,i have
    so many yet i have none yes my
    confusion it total now ,and i cant
    help but think that life is over for me.

    There is a time when i need a shoulder
    but when i turn to you there is nobody there,
    where is the smile?,and the promice you made to
    me,i feel the world crashing and i can not stop it.

    I wish i could feel better about being here but
    with how you have been treating me i see freind's
    as curse, yes people you can not trust, it hurts me
    everytime i see this way you dump on me how empty it is.

    If only friends were true to me there are the rare time's
    when i see someone smile but then i see they have a friend
    that makes them see the blue sky's,why must i go through life
    knowing only pain and lonelyness?, it's not fair that i live this way.

    As i sit here in my room in an empty house i wish there could be
    laughter again but not from but from a freind but thats asking to much
    from someone like you,i didnt mean to waist your time with my sorry complaints
    i was only wanting to share my day with you my freind?

    I will go now and let you live your happy life....because i dont
    need friends to end mine .
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Freinds Never Come!

    You pussy!! Quit thinkin suicidal! Who's gonna drive your 500k car then, huh?
    And you have at least one friend. Me. And I listen as well!

    Good vent poem though..........some punctuation and spelling probs.....but they are excusable, considering your emotional state.....
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: Freinds Never Come!

    lol it was just a poem the thought never enterd my mind sure the poem it self was pretty much to the point but i added the last part for dramtic reason's
    didnt mean to rub you te wrong way. maybe i should have staed that after i was done writing it. but im glad you liekd it though
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Freinds Never Come!

    Ah well......Just motivationals.............If only I could motivate..Wait, I do.........Man.........I just need......to......get.......LAID!!*ahem* Random thoughts, sorry. Back on topic...........Who else is gonna post.......bet there are gonna be some females here to console you............perhaps not.....ah well..........
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    Re: Freinds Never Come!

    anyway you look at it its still a poem about somone who thinks friends should be there when there not. i just hope someone take it better than you did though you concern is apreciated.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Freinds Never Come!

    Quote Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23 View Post
    You pussy!! Quit thinkin suicidal! Who's gonna drive your 500k car then, huh?
    And you have at least one friend. Me. And I listen as well!

    Good vent poem though..........some punctuation and spelling probs.....but they are excusable, considering your emotional state.....
    TAURUS YOU ARE SO ARROGANT AND RUDE. AND THAT DEMEANING WORD IS A OBJECTION TO WOMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    YOU ARE....UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    great poem chris. my friends ross writes this kind of stuf kinda creeps me out but it's hot. nice. go to borders and recite it. poetry contest every saturday!!


    TAURUS..............UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

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    Re: Freinds Never Come!

    its very good and all not bad for a poem artist keep up the good work

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    Re: Freinds Never Come!

    that was a very nice poem , i can relate to that ,
    anyways man that was an awesome poem ,
    keep up the good work
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