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Reply With Quoteawesomeparty12 (Feb 04, 2009)
There are no such things as friends,
Friends are just people who you tell all your secrets to,
So they can just Fu** you off later,
Betrayal, Backstabing, and Deseat,
That is all they know.
They say that they'll be there,
They say that they care,
But really,
They don't,
They arent gonna be there,
And they don't really care,
They don't give a crap about the time that you shared,
But really if you look at it,
It is my own damn fault for trusting them in the first place,
And never again,
Shall i make that mistake.
awesomeparty12 (Feb 04, 2009)
this poem is really good and i will say
"If there was a perfect friend for me ill be happy,"
but i dont have friends!
good poem!!
The world isn't ready for the truth...
CBtay01 (Feb 04, 2009)
Did one of your friends keep you down or just leave a lone when He-she trust that he will be here when ever you want …Just fake trusts..
Love it, it just shake my head that in this life you can’t trust any one, either you..
But all over the poem good made and love the questions that make the write for a moment..
Foolish beating
CBtay01 (Feb 04, 2009)
well what really happend long story short i have some friends that have been my friends for about 10 years and now they are turning on me really bad and i realized if they can do that then anyone can and i was really upset when i wrote this it is dated Feb 1st 09 so not too long ago
A really good poem and it has a nice rythm and flow, but you should know that "friends" aren't allways like that.... But a good poem
CBtay01 (Feb 05, 2009)
This poem is really good. Someone must have pissed you off really bad to make it so powerful. Good one, keep it up ^^
Originally Posted by Legend
CBtay01 (Feb 05, 2009)
lolthanks a lot and yeah they did and now they tried to appologize for making me break down in front of half the school
wow i feel for you i mean if i was there i would have knocked them senseless
i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility
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