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    Friends we'll stay

    This is a poem to a very close person to my heart. Even though our journy may part you'll always be on my mind. I'll be here for you if you need me and i'll find you in the dark...

    Friends we'll stay

    Once again in a situation
    Longing for things to be right
    Searching for the answers
    That bring me happiness

    For the darkness is something
    Surrounding us in heart ache
    In blood, gore, and death

    In the day it’s not as heavy
    But it continues to linger
    Always coming closer

    Until one day we break free
    Bring the light to life
    Drawing back the darkness
    So one can see

    You finally find the answers
    You were searching for
    Always and forever
    Etched in your heart

    I don’t mean to sound cruel
    causing pain is not my thing
    All that i meant
    Was i’ll be your light

    I’ll guide you when your down
    Ease the pain your in
    The suffering may not go away
    but it will at least subside

    For i promised to love you
    Always and forever
    So in my heart you’ll stay
    Even if we may not last

    Just remember that
    I am here for you
    I’ll always be your friend
    Before and After
    Till the very end

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    Re: Friends we'll stay

    nice poem jamie
    i think this poem is dedicated to your nearest and dearest friend
    if i'm not mistaking

    "If you need something to worship, then worship life - all life, every last crawling bit of it! We're all in this beauty together!" - Frank Herbert

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    Re: Friends we'll stay

    Nice ^^ I like it... Very sweet... I wish I could write something like that to say how I feel and it's definetely nice to get something like that written for you ^^

    This is quite a simple poem but YOU make it really wonderful, by the wish in your heart to be a light for someone... very nice ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Friends we'll stay

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Nice ^^ I like it... Very sweet... I wish I could write something like that to say how I feel and it's definetely nice to get something like that written for you ^^

    This is quite a simple poem but YOU make it really wonderful, by the wish in your heart to be a light for someone... very nice ^^
    thank you.. It was written for someone near and dear to me...

    Thanks.. I will always be his light.. even though he may not always be with be or want me to be there but i will and am.

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    Re: Friends we'll stay

    It is a very nice Poem Jamie I enjoyed reading it. great job keep it up alright?
    ナサン フォオツド
    Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
    Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173

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